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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

really awesome OS!

Aptly portrayed. Just hope CVs take some clue from all the nice OSes popping all over the forum. :)

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Oh my goddd...so beautiful yaar😃😃 So amazing...I totally loved it..Esp the last part where he says he just wants her around him..and they want to have a fresh start..⭐️⭐️..Really awesome writing👏👏 pls write more yaar..love your OS⭐️⭐️

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.ProperPatola

@.ProperPatola

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

This was superb, something I would definitely like to see. Loved the details about Raman's feelings, restlessness and regret. Lovely

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS Dear!Pls continue soon & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?

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BeautyFooL

@BeautyFooL

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Beautifully written scene..
Love the start of OS- with the quote from Nicholas Spark's Dear John.. Matched perfectly..
Love the way you depicted RKB's inner turmoil..realising nd accepting the mistake..The conclusion of this OS with RKB's heartfelt apology, perfect way to close the
update.. Love IshRa moment at the end.. Awesome OS..

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This was beautiful dear and I loved it.

May I pls know your name 😳

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: EkPaheli
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">This was beautiful dear and I loved it.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">May I pls know your name😳</font>

Thanks :) you can call me Lucky!

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Maaneet099
really awesome OS!
Aptly portrayed. Just hope CVs take some clue from all the nice OSes popping all over the forum. :)

I know right... the perv track has forced so many people to write positive stories and scenes... 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: simples28
Oh my goddd...so beautiful yaar😃😃 So amazing...I totally loved it..Esp the last part where he says he just wants her around him..and they want to have a fresh start..⭐️⭐️..Really awesome writing👏👏 pls write more yaar..love your OS⭐️⭐️

Thanks 😊

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Ram-an-tic.Moi

@Ram-an-tic.Moi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

What a lovely OS! Charged with emotions and full of love! Especially Raman's apology & a request for another chance at love & life. And my heart just skipped a beat when i read the last scene where Ishita throws herself into his arms and feels like she belongs there because i could imagine That happening on the show! It would be so awww-some!
Made for a superb read buddy :)

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