ishra os: repentance PART 2 PG 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was too cute! We all are waiting for a caring Raman now😆 update soon! Will be waiting!!!❤️
Well, i like your writing style😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just tooo good. Loved every bit of reading ur update. Plzz continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aaah omggg,...jst read two updates...i loved 2nd one more...omgg it ws breathtakin and as well as heart touching...!!

plz plz continue soon n pm me too..!! u write amazingly well..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Os, can't wait for the next part 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res... Edited

WOW... both the parts are so differently written. Kudos.👏

The first part - there was not exchange of words between them, yet so much was said. Wonderful and emotional. I especially liked the part where you wrote that they had an unsaid agreement about who sleeps where, and how Raman took the first step😊

Second part - what shall I say... very very touching. You wrote about Ishita's pain and the healing Raman is trying for... the second part trying to balance out the negativity of the first...

Please do continue...
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it! Update the next part Asap, cant wait for it! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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simply amazing
loved it
keep writing
looking forward to read more😃.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice ... waiting waiting for ur next update
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Awww,,, super cute update!!!! Loved it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2
ishita came running home. "I didn't see ruhi the whole day. I hope she is awake now." she entered home panting. there...she saw her pretty
princess chatting with her dad with enthusiasm. she became happy on seeing them together. she was proud for having a daughter like this. her daughter has stood for her many times. ruhi has stood before subbu's mom and told her that she was not infertile. ishita didn't feel motherless at all. she thought "god did not give me child because he knew I would meet ruhi and she would change my life forever". a huge smile crept on her face seeing them. she entered asking "so what is my princess talking about?". " oh no papa ishima came...don't tell it now." ishita became curious. "what are you hiding from your ishima ruhi?...raman please tell na". "ruhi you tell your ishima". ruhi dragged ishita to one corner and told "ishima...I want you to wear the blue dress papa gave you". "why suddenly?" asked ishita. "please ishima, don't ask any questions. go and change na!". "ok baby as you say" smiled ishita. "ishita mind it...my dress would be a perfect fit for you" raman commented. "lets see" challenged ishita hearing that comment.
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"darn how could this happen? how it fits perfectly? how will I face raman?...but the dress looks pretty eventhough..." ishita sighed. "he is going to bombard me with his ONE LINERS."
she came out bracing herself. when raman saw her his jaw dropped a little. she was stunning in his favourite. her hands were fidgeting with the dress nervously. suddenly ruhi broke the silence."ishima you look pretty in this dress. like a princess". "thank you baby" ishita beamed. "papa how is ishima looking?" "she looks perfect from my choice of size. is it not ishita?" raman asked ishita. "u are too mean raman. check your eyes first. I am looking pretty" "you check your ears ishita...I was taking about your size" raman grinned. "you!!.." ishita was to start again but got interrupted by ruhi. "oh god you too started quarrelling again! I'll better go to dadi's room" ruhi told them and went off. "but ruhi you..."ishita's voice trailed of as raman held hand and pulled her closer to him. "why ishita ...you wont like my presence alone?" raman asked pulling her waist closer to him. there was barely any space between them. "noth...nothing like tha..t raman" she stammered. "then?" raman asked tucking her hair behind her ear. he then bit her earlobe a little teasing her. "ramann..."ishita moaned a little coming close to him for support. he kissed her fingertips ...he then kissed her cheeks. her hands automatically hugged him. her heartbeats were going crazy.
he then kissed her chin and was trailing kisses in her jawline. she could not bear this kind of torture anymore. she became shy and hugged him burying her face under his neck."surprising...what happened to my jansi? she is bcoming shy nowadays?" raman teased her."oh please raman" ishita said and was about to turn away when her leg got twisted. "ouch" she cried holding raman for support. raman immediately lifted her and carried her towards their bed. "wont you walk carefully ishita?" raman asked her while frantically getting some cream for her leg. he then applied it on ishita's leg. "is it paining?" he asked. "somewhat i think" she replied. "you better take rest today " he told he switching off the lights and slept next to her. she turned towards him and hugged him and said "thanks for coming into my life raman" and kissed his forehead. "it should be me thanking you ishita. for being a wonderful mother for our daughter and a responsible wife for me". "anyways raman...what was that surprise you both were having for me haan? " ishita asked. "that...is nothing but surprise ishita darling. now you better sleep for sometime...else" he winked at ishita. she giggled slightly and they both slept peacefully hugging each other.
guys there u go THIS UPDATE WAS UNPLANNED. I WROTE AT THE SPUR OF THE MOMENT. HOPE U LIKE IT.
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