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Posted: 11 years ago
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its long. have patience. it is long but there is lots of romance at the end
it is a few days before Ramans birthday. evryone except raman is present.
ruhi says she wants to give him a small party. mrs bhalla agrees as Raman n Ruhis relationship has improved n raman is doing well in his business. but she says it would have been better if Adi was with them too. Simmi says shagun has spread so much poison in adis mind that he wont come if we invite him. mrs b says raman bi nahi manega. ruhi says she wil make him agree.
Ishita phones shagun. she sees ishitas name on her phone n is intrigued. she picks up.
hi ishita. kaise phone hua.
parso unka birthday hai. so tumhe or adi ko invite karne ke liye phone kiya hai.
kyu, kya mujhe or adi ko phir se embarass karana hai or sorry bulvana hai.
Come on, Shagun. tum jaanti ho ki galti adi ka ta or holi mein bhi woh galat ta. plz lets stop these games. at least ruhi ki khatir ajao.ruhi will be very happy.

tumhe kya lagta hain. adi apne papa ki party mein nahi jana chahega. adi jaana chahega. par tum waha hogi isi liye woh nahi aayega.
tik hain. main party main nahi rahugi.
Fine. I 'll bring adi. (andar hi andar shagun wants to see Raman).
and she cuts the phone n goes to adi.
Adi. chalo mere saath. Raman papa ke liye birthday gift karidni hai. uski party mein hum jaayenge.
mujhe nahi jaana unke party main.
Beta, agar hum nahi gaye toh woh ishita tumhari papa ko tumhari khilaaf or barkayegi. or ruhi ko bhi. Anyways she wont be at the party.
ok mom.
midnight on Ramans birthday. Raman is on his laptop. ishita and ruhi come in suddenly.
happy birthday papa.
Thank you. betahappy birthday, Raman
thnx.tum abhi tak soyi nahi.
nahi. mujhe apko sabse se pehle wish karnata.
ruhi gives her present which is the best dad trophy. ishita gives a picture of ruhi n him. (they really need to take a family pic. shuda been at d contract party).
thnk you.
i love u very much papa.
i love u more.
ishima aap bhi bolo na. maine suna baarish wali din pe papa ne apse kaha par apne unko nahi kaha. so aaj kehdo.
ishita hesitantly and shyly says i love u.
apka birthday kissy. she kisses him on the cheek.
birthday pe, sirf ek hi kissy.
Ruhi looks at Ishita. Ishita and Raman look shocked n embarassed.
ofo, ishima ap dusre gal mein papa ko kissy do na. sharmao mat. me sab samajti hoon. main ab bari hogayi hoon. main apne ankh bandh karti hoon.
i. ok. no peeking.then ruhi closes her eyes n putsher hands overs her eyes.
raman n ishita whisper to each other.
r. tumhe nahi lagta aaj kal hamari beti kuch zyada hi samajdar hogayi hain.
i. bilkul. ruhi ab tum aanken kol sakti ho.
ruhi checks her dads cheek.
ap dono jhooth bol rahe ho. papa ke gaalon me koi lipstick hi nahi laga.
r. maine pochliya hai isliye.
toh pir apna hat dikayiye
she checks his hand n ders no lipstick on it. and looks very upset
aap jhooth bol rahe ho. main pir se ankh bandh karti hoon.
ishita luks at raman nervously. they whisper the following
ab hum kya kare.
chup.
main kyu chup hoon. apna hi toh pucha ta. sirf ek hi kissy.
mujhe koi shokh nahi tumse kiss le ne mein. tumhari tappar koi kam ta. apne pati ko tappar dene mein sharam nahi aayata. main toh ruhi ki bare mein bat kar rahata.
ru: itni long kissy.
r: nahi ruhi, woh bas tumhari ishima bohot sharma rahi hain. lagta hain jo bi karna hoga. mujhe hi karna hoga.
i. aap
muh band. he puts a finger to her mouth.
she stops talking.
raman then brings his body and face closer to ishitas. looks into her eyes. then he puts his hands near her lips. then raman scrapes some lipstick off her lips and puts it on his cheeks. All the time ishita is just shocked. secretly liking it n blushing.
ra. ruhi beta. ab tum ankhen kol sak ti ho.
ruhi then runs and checks.
ru. yeh lipstick ap par bohot achi lagti hain.
ra. achcha baadmash.
they all laugh.
n then they both go to giv ruhi a kiss on opposing cheeks.
then ruhi moves her head away.
n their lips nearly meet.
ruhi laughs. N they feel embarassed again
ab main sone ja rahi hoon. aap dono se romance kara te meh tak gayi hoon.
on the day of his party.
breakfast.
papa. humne aap ke liye party raki hain. aap late mat hona. tik paanch baje.
beta. mujhe yeh party sab pasand nahi hai.
papa. plz mere liye.
tik hain. tik hain
yay. n ruhi dances with joy.
4.30
ishita has finished making the cake (maybe lemon cos its sour or wat you guys think) and gets ready to go out. she hesitantly goes to mrs bhalla n ruhi.
mummyji, ruhi beta, mujhe abhi nikalna hoga. clinic main emergency hain.
mrs b. jaana zaroori hai kya. tora or der ke liye rukh nahi sakti.
ishima nahi, mein aap ko jaane nahi dungi. me apse khatti hoja ungi
samjho beta. bohot zaroori hain. koi bachcha bohot dard mein hai. mera farz hai unka dard ko dur karne ka.
par ap jayegi toh papa ko dard hoga.
papa tora upset honge par woh samjhe ge. vaise maine unko bohot tarike wish kar diya or gift bi de diya. im sorry. plz upset mat hona.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice. Pls do continue
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update plz FF bara filmy hay per its good
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Amazing update
So it's raman's birthday
Ishu canals adi
Ohh Shagun asked her not to be there
Ishu leaving for clinic making excuse
Let's see sheathed raman finds out
Hope he brings her to the party with all respect and care
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loved it
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GREAT, WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART, PLEASE PM IF POSSIBLE
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please continue...ASAP!
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next part ???? next part?????


update soon!!

waiting!!!
well written!
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i have updated it already. its just called my ishra ff updated.

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