The worst boy in the world - An IshRa OS. - Page 3

Originally posted by: vidya29

This was seriously intense.yeah.
I was apprehensive when I first read the quote and what this was about.The end product though,it blew me off.
I absolutely love how there were many things besides just Raman seeing Ishita went on in this OS.
Ishita coming into her own again,living life without dictations-it was refreshing to read.
Ishita is not in denial of the changes in the dynamic of her relationship with her husband is so in tune with the Ishita we see on screen.She has always been more expressive of the feelings Raman invokes in her and your Ishita followed suit.I felt extremely happy to read the first part of your OS.
Another thing I noticed or felt was that despite a ruthless betrayal,Ishita is not bitter in her memories of Subbu.
Then she behaves like a girl in love,or the beginnings of it.It is quite natural to be attracted to a man ( a hot one at that!☺️) and she isnt the typical girl who denies that.me likey!
The centre-piece of this fiction,was quite splendidly penned.I was so engrossed that it leaves me all high and dry.I want to read more.
I loved the portrayal of all the emotions that the two went through and the little naughty streak the both of them showed.
This is getting quite long.so I'll wrap it up by saying the part where Raman stops her from going was my favorite.It showed what was hidden beneath harsh exteriors and Raman was so intense that I wish I was Ishita instead😳.
I'll be re-reading this for a million times perhaps.It was a brilliant experience.Do write more such exceptional pieces.God bless Nikki_Titli for being the inspiration.
Take care.

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

wow u said evrythin so beautifully which ws similar i felt too while readin it...😃😃..

n dear 200% credit goes to Aani only n IshRa is her inspiration...i dnt come anywhere in the pic..!!

bt still sweet of u to say this n again super sweet of Aani for dedicatin this wonderful OS to me..!!

Originally posted by: jojo1986

Omg loved it ☺️ So hot😳

Originally posted by: uamaz

OMG, i dont know about worst boy in the world but this is the best scene in the world... by heart stopped breathing at their intimacy, haayyeee 😳
Well done, if i wanted cvs to copy any scene it would have to be this 😆

Originally posted by: Ram-an-tic.Moi

Superrrb OS! So so romantic!
Loved how beautifully you penned down the tension between Raman & Ishita! Like WOW! I'm spellbound!
What i liked most though was how you incorporated humour & romance so seamlessly! Loved every bit of the story!
Cheers to you & your outstanding stories! :D

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

Ugh Aani you always manage to make me weak on my knees with your beautiful stories!

Actually more than the stories, I love your quotes at the beginning 😆

Very realistic and lovely. Loved that Raman knew about the sewing kit. :)

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

thanks so much Madhu and EEPS 😛 a fellow quote lover YAY!! I love reading and collecting quotes 😃 so happy to know someone out there is a geek like me 😆

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

Oh darling I must confess, the only quote I knew was your 100 Sonnets quote. I was once a huge bookworm but studies and fanfiction have destroyed the bookworm in me 😆 This summer is going to be dedicated to books (hopefully) 😃

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Aani, I liked how to brought out the girl in Ishita. She was excited about dressing up. I liked your story too in general, but Raman's confession later seemed a little ahead of time. I personally would have preferred the unsaid things and Raman thinking how beautiful Ishita was looking in his usual silent way.

This line was really funny.

The other times when he has been this quiet, it has been because he was extremely furious or when he had a bad throat - this is neither of those times.😆

Ofcourse, the bulge one was very amusing. You have an awesome head, my girl!🤗😃

By the way, you siggy is adorable! Shravan-Raman scene was super cute.