The worst boy in the world - An IshRa OS.

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Aani, 1st ly thank you for the pm.

Reminds me, have to yet read ur 1st OS and see the VM, will do till weekend, u didn't remind me of OS btw.

I read this, and you write fantastically, no kidding, way u connected current scenes with your story, way to go!! Loved the concept of him seeing her, sewing kit and possessive Raman, loved ishita's thoughts, way u potrayes emotions perfectly and your vocab is super great, u r multi talented, psing, VMs, and Os.

Didn't know u write so well, thank u for the treat!! Would love to read more frm you.Love ya, hugs!

Lastly I would like to give a heartfelt thanks and a hug to Niki for inspiring you to write.

-Madhura.

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

👏 👏 awesome,superb fantastic.I loved it so very much.ishita's vocabulary is really nice while cursing. 😆 raman's possesiveness n his naughtiness both was perfect.

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BeautyFooL

@BeautyFooL

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

*Edited*

Hi Aani, I am reading your writing for the first time.. And woaahh, Its fantastic!!!.. A beautiful scene brilliantly written.. A refreshing and Romantic❤️.. You have described Raman's protective cum possessive instincts beautifully in words.. Actual scene was humorous and your version of scene was passionately romantic.. I really it more than the actual epi😳.. I really love the way you depicted Ishita's flash back , Ruhi- Ishu bonding, IshRa's arguments *so Typical*, and Romance .. Perfect balance of Romance & passion⭐️.. Could actually imagine the scene.. Thanks for such a wonderful piece of writing..Please do write more😃

Edited by -DreamWeaver- - 11 years ago

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RamonaG

@RamonaG

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

awesomely well written ❤️

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sweetydee

@sweetydee

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Wow, you are truly talented. I loved every single bit. I wish this would really happen

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Amazing it was just love it

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Madhura..
Aani, 1st ly thank you for the pm.
Reminds me, have to yet read ur 1st OS and see the VM, will do till weekend, u didn't remind me of OS btw.
I read this, and you write fantastically, no kidding, way u connected current scenes with your story, way to go!! Loved the concept of him seeing her, sewing kit and possessive Raman, loved ishita's thoughts, way u potrayes emotions perfectly and your vocab is super great, u r multi talented, psing, VMs, and Os.
Didn't know u write so well, thank u for the treat!! Would love to read more frm you.Love ya, hugs!

Lastly I would like to give a heartfelt thanks and a hug to Niki for inspiring you to write.

-Madhura.

Hey Madhura 😊 thanks so much for this comment and I had forgotten to remind you about the other OS 😳

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: lourel24
👏 👏 awesome,superb fantastic.I loved it so very much.ishita's vocabulary is really nice while cursing. 😆 raman's possesiveness n his naughtiness both was perfect.

Thanks Lourel 😊