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Posted: 11 years ago
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Author's Note;

This "FF-Fan Fiction" as the name states is a 'Fiction' therefore All characters appearing in this story are fictitious. Any resemblance to people living or dead is purely coincidental. This FF contains 'Mature Content' reader discretion advised due to sexual situations.

Do Take Note:
>> Pink for 'Ishita'
>> Blue for 'Raman'
>> Whatever this colour is called,LOL is for the 'Narration'

Suhag Raat ~~ First Night

[Part Two]


The enormous bed is ultramodern, made of rough, gray wood somewhat like driftwood, four posts but no canopy. On the wall above it hung ISHRA's Beautiful Wedding Picture.

Raman removes his watch. His always heard Ishita saying how no matter what or where his watch is always with him. Normal people would remove their watch at least when going to bed lekin Mr. Raman Kumar sleeps with his watch only. Perhaps it's the side effects of being the best CEO of the year having to constantly keep on track with the time. He removes his watch and places it on top of a chest of drawers. Ishita is just staring at him, she can't seem to take her eyes of him. She speaks to herself, complimenting on how heart-stoppingly handsome he is.

And the next thing you know it, Raman makes his way towards Ishita...slowly..just like in the Bollywood movies where the Heros would give this super sexy walk with sparkles in their eyes gazing upon up the heroine. Ishita's heart starts to pound faster as he inches closer by the second. "He's so freaking hot", she told herself while trying to hide away the giggles that followed thereafter. Raman stood in front of Ishita, staring down into her eyes.

"Do you have any idea how much I want you, Mrs. IshitaRamanKumarBhalla?" he whispers. "No lekin I know how much you didn't want me in the past." "And look who's breaking the promise the now?" "Arre sorry yaar Raman. It was a causal comment." "Apology not accepted, I'm still upset.""Arre baba, didn't I already say sorry. Ok tell what should I do now, so that my baby will no longer be upset." "Punishment is the only solution." "Punishment? Tum bachcha bana rahe ho na" "Nahi, I'm dead serious" "Kya punishment?" "Wait and watch my Jhansi Ki Rani." Raman's playful yet sensuous tone says it all. Ishita very well knows what the punishment is and in fact she would have deliberately made a mistake if she had too just to punished in her Ravana Kumar style. "Do you have any idea what I'm going to do to you?" he adds caressing her chin.

Muscles that Ishita didn't know existed inside the deepest, darkest part of her body clenched in the most delicious fashion. She looks into his eyes just like a hypnotized person. Leaning down, he kissed her. His lips were demanding, firm and slow. Raman slowly starts unbuttoning Ishita's Kurti, while placing feather like kisses across her jaw, making his way to he chin and the corners of her mouth. Gently slides the kurti off her shoulders, lets it fall to the floor. Stands back and gazes at her. Ishita is in a sexy unlined demi lacy pink bra. "Oh, Ishu," he breathes. "You have the most beautiful skin...shimmering and flawless. It will be my lips greatest sin to not have kissed every single inch of it." He graps her hair tie and pulls it free, her hair now dangling freely around her shoulders. "I've always wanted to do that, seeing your hair tied in a ponytail." "I knew it. So you were the one who kept hiding my hair tie right." "Yes, I did hide them." "But why?" "Because only a bewakoof like you will tie up such a beautiful shiny long luscious hair. I love it when your hair dangles freely, swiftly waving." as he finished saying that he grasps her with both his hands grasping each side of her head. Starts kissing her...his kiss is demanding, his tongue and lips coaxing hers. As Ishita lets out a moan, her tongue tentatively meets his.

Raman puts his around her and hauls her against his toned body, squeezing her tightly. Keeping one hand in her hair, his other hand travels down her spine to her slim waist and down to her behind. His hand almost instantly flexes over her backside and squeezes gently. Ishita can feel his erection as he holds her against his hips. She moves her hands up to his face and into his hair, tugging it gently. AND out of nowhere Raman drops to his knees grabbing Ishita's hips with both hands and starts running his tongue around her navel, then gently...gently making sure not to hurt her, he nips his way to her hipbone, than across her belly to her other hipbone. "AHHH," groans Ishita.

& To be Continued.

Hey dearies, we are heading to the CLIMAX of ISHRA's "Suhag Raat"...😉 DIL BOLE HADIPPA.😆


P.S. Hope you all enjoyed the 2nd part of ISHRA's Suhag Raat. Don't forget to leave your likes and valuable comments [Criticisms] are Most Welcomed as well. 👍🏼 Love you guys.

Edited by ForbbidenLove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
MEE! I'm first! YES I AM ❤️
Need to read both parts then edit. Hopefully by Weekend
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Very well written...you have a great imagination...😳 😳 😳 😳
Still thinking what to write this Raman na...😳 😳 😉
Please continue more...dil maange more...!! 😳 😳 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
OMGGG😃..Shiva..that was sooo hot and romantic yaar..Show mei toh yeh dekhne ko nahi milenga😛..So im just letting my imaginations run wild through your story😃..Oh and btw I loved how gentle he is with her😳😳😳..Love their cute conversations midst their romantic sessions⭐️⭐️..I love how they both want to put behind their past and enjoy the glorious moments of the present..😳😳❤️

ROFL ..I liked the below dialogue alot Shivu..😆😆
"Do you have any idea how much I want you, Mrs. IshitaRamanKumarBhalla?" he whispers. "No lekin I have know how much you didn't want me in the past." 😆😆

You really know how to make the story hot and sizzling😳☺️..You are such a good writer👍🏼👏..and can write any type of story..wooow yaarr😃..so super talented you are and so beautifully written👏👏..Please update soon😃😃..Eeeks I cannot wait☺️..Thanks alot for the PM dearie..😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Can we ever see Mr.Ravan kumar Bhalla in this avatar/
As usual shiva, Just beautiful.( Nothin else0,

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
I was getting into the heat of things,pupils dilating,heatbeat getting erratic and BAM!
There ends the update. You are a tease!
😆
You sure are wild with your visions for IshRa and girl, you can write.😊You had me anticipating their next reaction and I was disappointed when it ended at a moan😔.(Shouldn't I be slightly embarrassed to say that!😕)
Anyway,I could totally picture Raman (KP actually😳) walking towards Ishitha and saying all that and doing all that.
I am doubtful as to this ever happening on the show but that's the joy of fanfiction.
You write really well⭐️ and needless to say I'll wait for the next update.
Take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
will come back to read properly..haha just breezed past..and i could see Karan patel LIVe..the rawness..of him..demureness of Ishita.. ishita's eyes..u r fabulous..this is LIVE YHM goin on inside this thread..u r a great great director.. ur writing has everything so radiantly crystal clear..and love shines through it all..a topic that had to be tread so sensitively aesthetically..and u do the tight rope walking in order to not let it slip to the sleazy realm..u r very very fabulous... u elevated the whole thing to a divine ishraland trance.awesome..wait poora padhkar aur likhti noon.Meanwhile lots of hugs to u.👏
*Res*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
omggg such hot hot romance...n am SPEECHLESS...☺️🤣

brilliant update shivu..!! waitin for the climax..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Really awesome update ishra reaching towards their climax hmmm waiting for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
I don't know whether to love you or hate you because you build up such awesome chemistry and now leave me hanging dry for the next update, LOL! Please update as soon as possible !!

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