~|The Rekindled Flame|~ Chap 3 on PG 19 ! 5 JULY 2014 - Page 7

Originally posted by: sparikh

Beautiful start - school friends meeting again; how sweet!

-Sona

Originally posted by: Shivi1997

Love it
update soon

Originally posted by: Live-life

Oh Wow!

That was an awesome first chapter Dude! You have left me speechless.

So it starts out with two people setting out to do their usual routine and ironic as they say opposites attract and Ravan Kumar is the North while Jhansi ki Rani is the south. So they have to attract.

First chapter mien hi first meeting after a whole 10 years wow! That was indeed a treat to read. I mean the way you described their joy on merely just seeing each other was...so...warm and...pure. I could feel it just reading it. The smile that adorned both their lips when they saw each other after 10 years was just...really hard to describe in words for me. It's like you have found the light at the end of the tunnel...or even gotten hold of the anchor before drowning. To me...it was a feeling just out of this world...I mean you described each moment of their meeting so week that I felt like I was right there in the scene when all of this was taking place.

And It made me smile...and I am still smiling like an idiot. Recalling school days is the best things to do in the world. Especially if it's with your old buddies. I know cause I am living them right now and once in a while we recall our previous years and laugh at them like crazy. God school days are a gift! I wish I could just stay like this forever and never grow up. Thanks for including that part yaar. It made me relate to the story better. 😳

And especially the ending scene. I don't know why but it seemed like this meeting is going to change both their lives forever. Even though nothing is prefect right now in their lives but this one good thing happens and uska result you see in the future. and you'll look back and wonder...agar wo meeting nahi hoti to para nahi aaj kya hota? Well...this meeting is indeed going to be life changing

Thank you for such a wonderful update dude! I am really glad that I am reading your works again. Missed them since Arjun ended! Thank for the PM!

Update soon!

😃

Originally posted by: eternalasha

Great start - same characters, fresh story - love that it is in Darjeeling - Look forward to reading the rest ove a cup of tea😉Do write soon.

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

rockin beginnin to this FF...bt wht touched my heart the most ws ur THE LAST LINE..n thts epic true for show waale IshRa too..!!

plz continue soon n thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: Mudrika25

Nice update and an amazing start. ...

I've sent you buddy request please pm me the next u update...😳 Thank u...

Originally posted by: likithakmh

Lady you made me senti there! Woah such a long comment. Well, congratulations cause you just gave the biggest appreciation and the longest comment to me ever !😃😳 I mean it!

I love it when readers connect to the story, its like you guys breathe in the story and not just merely read it. It means a lot to amateur writers like me!

You just made my day. And omg. I loved your comment.

School days are the most amazing parts of life! having lived in almost 7 cities in the past 16 years, its a wonder that i still have that bond with each and every person i have ever met.

Its true, Where there is love, there is a friend.😃

Thank you so much for your meaningful comment! Made my day. :')

Originally posted by: vishruta

Omg
Ita wonderful
Loved it
Absolutely
Thanks for the pm n starting it again
Loved it
Really
Awesome pls continue soon
Love the story line

Originally posted by: Live-life

Well...I am senti fool too...sooo that makes two if us! haha I like giving long comments...mien emotions ke saath ben jaato hoon haha! don't judge 😆

I am glad i could make you happyyy! haha! 😳

Oh wow...that's a lot of moving around...yeah living them right now...I can tell that they are probably the best phase in life...god I never wanna grow up!

Awww! itni bhi senti mat hojaooo! warna mein bhi hooo jaungiii!

Haha! We're alike i guess!😳

So here's to a new friendship :P I'm likitha! You can call me Liki!😛

Really, you brought a smile on my face(usually boys do :P Haha jk :P😆), thanks a lot for that! 😳

Senti fool hoon main! aur meri hindi, IS BAD. 😆

So, i'm off to write the next part!😃

Originally posted by: likithakmh