~|The Rekindled Flame|~ Chap 3 on PG 19 ! 5 JULY 2014

Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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beautifully written...

asusual the same magic also here...

enjoyed reading it...

p.s.have u forgetten arakshi story...do updATE NA!!!!!ema...

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Ram-an-tic.Moi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow! Like WOW! Lovely update buddy! Brilliant start!

In fact can't wait to read the next one! I'm an impatient soul of sorts. And such beautifully written stories always leave me curious to know what lies ahead. So much so that i contemplate skipping the updates until i've amassed a few to read them one after the other! :P

But then, curiosity gets the better of me & i'm again left impatiently waiting for the next part! LOL!

Please do update soon! You know why, right?! :P

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likitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Ram-an-tic.Moi
Wow! Like WOW! Lovely update buddy! Brilliant start!

In fact can't wait to read the next one! I'm an impatient soul of sorts. And such beautifully written stories always leave me curious to know what lies ahead. So much so that i contemplate skipping the updates until i've amassed a few to read them one after the other! :P

But then, curiosity gets the better of me & i'm again left impatiently waiting for the next part! LOL!

Please do update soon! You know why, right?! :P

Omg. You seem like my reflection, well dont be scared. :P

Haha! I really liked ur enthu!😳

So, this has made me to consider writing the next chapter very soon, who knows? Maybe by tomo i'll update! 😃

Thank you soo much! Much needed comments!😛

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Sona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Beautiful start - school friends meeting again; how sweet!

-Sona

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likitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: anu91
beautifully written...
asusual the same magic also here...
enjoyed reading it...

p.s.have u forgetten arakshi story...do updATE NA!!!!!ema...

Haha! Unusual magic! aww thanks for that!😳

Hehee. I will update. Soon.😉

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Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: likithakmh

Haha! Unusual magic! aww thanks for that!😳

Hehee. I will update. Soon.😉

awe!!!will be waiting for ur soonish update liki...don forget...

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Ram-an-tic.Moi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Omg. You seem like my reflection, well dont be scared. :P

Haha! I really liked ur enthu!😳

So, this has made me to consider writing the next chapter very soon, who knows? Maybe by tomo i'll update!😃

Thank you soo much! Much needed comments!😛

😆 Then you would definitely understand my plight! :D

In fact it is only today that i read the teaser too! After reading ch1! :P Must say, it is an extremely interesting plot! Excited to read how they are going to open up to each other about their past & help each other move on from there!

So glad you are considering updating by tomorrow itself! I for one am going to be eagerly waiting for it! Do PM me once you have updated. :)

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Oh Wow!

That was an awesome first chapter Dude! You have left me speechless.

So it starts out with two people setting out to do their usual routine and ironic as they say opposites attract and Ravan Kumar is the North while Jhansi ki Rani is the south. So they have to attract.

First chapter mien hi first meeting after a whole 10 years wow! That was indeed a treat to read. I mean the way you described their joy on merely just seeing each other was...so...warm and...pure. I could feel it just reading it. The smile that adorned both their lips when they saw each other after 10 years was just...really hard to describe in words for me. It's like you have found the light at the end of the tunnel...or even gotten hold of the anchor before drowning. To me...it was a feeling just out of this world...I mean you described each moment of their meeting so week that I felt like I was right there in the scene when all of this was taking place.

And It made me smile...and I am still smiling like an idiot. Recalling school days is the best things to do in the world. Especially if it's with your old buddies. I know cause I am living them right now and once in a while we recall our previous years and laugh at them like crazy. God school days are a gift! I wish I could just stay like this forever and never grow up. Thanks for including that part yaar. It made me relate to the story better. 😳

And especially the ending scene. I don't know why but it seemed like this meeting is going to change both their lives forever. Even though nothing is prefect right now in their lives but this one good thing happens and uska result you see in the future. and you'll look back and wonder...agar wo meeting nahi hoti to para nahi aaj kya hota? Well...this meeting is indeed going to be life changing

Thank you for such a wonderful update dude! I am really glad that I am reading your works again. Missed them since Arjun ended! Thank for the PM!

Update soon!

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Dhristi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Loved the 1st part pls continue soon

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likitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ram-an-tic.Moi

Omg. You seem like my reflection, well dont be scared. :P
Haha! I really liked ur enthu!😳
So, this has made me to consider writing the next chapter very soon, who knows? Maybe by tomo i'll update!😃
Thank you soo much! Much needed comments!😛

😆 Then you would definitely understand my plight! :D

In fact it is only today that i read the teaser too! After reading ch1! :P Must say, it is an extremely interesting plot! Excited to read how they are going to open up to each other about their past & help each other move on from there!

So glad you are considering updating by tomorrow itself! I for one am going to be eagerly waiting for it! Do PM me once you have updated. :)

Woah! I am really glad that you liked it so much. Gonna start writing now. Pheww. Let's give some work to those creative centres!😃

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