SS IshRa (Ishita & Raman)-Ek Naya Ehsaas- Part 3 - pg 14

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candico

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

beautifully written ... abh next part soon

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uamaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Nice update, thanks for pm 😛

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aashshhs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Lovely update...thanks for the message. Looking forward to the next part with great excitement

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Angel13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Fantastic update
Haha love how he was searching online on how to thank a wife lolz
Ishu stuck out there and raman worried for her
Loving the story
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

loved it.His possessiveness,care,concern was easily getting reflected in his harsh words.

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LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Intresting update Dear!Loved how Raman was searching on internet for Ishita on Ruhi's insistense!Raman was worried for Ishita & so went to search for Her!Waiting for next!Pls continue soon!

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ABI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

AWWHHH, I loved the way Raman tried being irritated but answered all the question fitting Ishita perfectly when he was looking for a gift for her. And the end when he starts worrying about her getting caught in the riot was amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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BeautyFooL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

*Edited*

Hey Deepika.. This is such a cute nd lovely update..
Loved the first two para the most.. beautifully written..
Love how RKB searched on website abt 'how to thank you your wife'.. That's so typical RKB ;)
Then how he got worried for her aftr talking to Rommie..
In your story, we see a different side of RKB.. So tender and caring heart.. how he subconsciously care for her.. I love how you showed his complex emotions through Mihir's eyes..
You have kept the essence of RKB's character in ur story.. I loved how you depicted RKB's emotions through small gestures.. Beautiful update..waiting for the next.. Thanks a ton for this wonderful piece of writing..

Edited by -DreamWeaver- - 11 years ago

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Nisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

still missing riot nt reached

raman monologue was superb

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geethuvasudevan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Awesome update dear. I especially loved the website and its qstns and how he answered it. And now he is gonna find out the answer for the last qstn and be amused of what he thought and what the truth is. Plz update soon. I loved ur language its beautiful.

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