SS IshRa (Ishita & Raman)-Ek Naya Ehsaas- Part 3 - pg 14

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Hey Friends ..My name is Deepika.This is my 1st post in YHM forum.I've written OS and SS in other Forum. First time, I've attempted to write on IshRa.. Hope you'll like it.. Your feedback will be anticipated..😊

This SS continues after revelation about the Land scam fiasco ...will finish it in 3-4 parts .


---Ek Naya Ehsaas---


Vivid bangles dancing on her delicate wrist created a heavenly melody in the deep painful silence in his heart..Every-time she lifted the hair strands and tucked behind her ear ..his heart skipped a beat..her petite frame adorned in a beautiful red saree bejeweled with ornamentation .It was a gift from her Mother in law ..his Mom.How flawlessly she managed to create a special place in the hearts of all his family members ,was a such a pleasant surprise for him.He looked at her squirting around his hall to serve their guests..The certainty and sincerity in her graceful walk amused him ..Isn't she hardly 45 days old in this household ?He wondered .One glance at her affection and warmth towards his family, tenderness for his countless relatives,faithfulness towards his house ;it seemed like she has lived in this house all her life .She truly appeared to be the lady of the house ,making sure everyone around is happy and content with the arrangements of the Kanjak Pooja ,one of the major celebrations for any punjabi household. She turned around to get something from the kitchen .The bare portion of her back revealing her flawless creamy complexion teased his senses .She had left her hair open with soft curls settled on her shoulders which was making her look even more angelic ..only if it was possible.His eyes roamed all over her.Her bare midriff titillated his imaginations. His eyes drank her image shamelessly. All he wanted to do is to take her in his embrace and...



All you want to do is to take her in your embrace ..Not bad Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla ..his inner-self retorted ...



Wo..main..wo...he mumbled .. failing to find an answer to this taunt...



Woah...looks like Jansi ki Rani managed to find the missing heartbeats in your heart of stone.his inner-self commented again.



Aisa kuch nehi hai...he tried to defend himself...trying to prove that he is unaffected by her selfless dedication and affection towards his house,his family and his Ruhi...



Kuch toh baat hai...warna The Raman Kumar Bhalla ...CEO of the Year...who claims to immune from all kinds of emotions is appreciating ..umm..correction...actually admiring a women ... the voice rang inside him once again...



Whereas you took oath to be uninfluenced by any women after facing that ruthless betrayal in your dark past..his inner-voice reminded him...



She is not any women ...Biwi hai wo meri ..he couldn't register when these words came out of his mouth ...or his heart



Oh...toh Biwi hai wo tumhari...you do realize that fact..that's great..toh usne tumhare liye jo kuch bhi kiya hai aaj tak sabke liye tumne use Thank you toh bola hi hoga na...he heard the question...aur haan sorry toh zaroor hi bola hoga tumne usse...tumhare sare badtamiziyon ke liye...



He was flabbergasted ...trapped in his own words...he remained silent...



She has done so much for you...for your family ...for Ruhi...her selfless motherly affection towards Ruhi gave your little angle a new life ...the life which was getting ruined because of your ego tussles with your ex-wife and her lowlife boy friend . She saved your daughter from getting crushed between an indifferent father and selfish mother..She saved your life from crumbling down .Look at you Raman ...you are no longer that unconcerned father to Ruhi..she greets you with an adorable smile and kiss everyday unlike in past when she used to get scared because of your rudeness ...Your father stopped talking to you as you killed his son Raman ruthlessly and decided to pretend only as Shagun's heartbroken and revengeful ex-husband ..Its after her entry in your life ,he could see his son once again.She has stopped your family from agonies by saving Simi and her family...even after all your taunts and insults ,she has rescued you from all those losses in business..She has given you a new life Raman..She has given a new meaning to your existence ...

She deserves your gratitude and respect to say the least.



He sighed ...looks like his inner-self has taken private tutions from his Rani of Jhansi in giving lectures..



His Rani of Jhansi...he was astonished about his own feelings..She makes him feel something different ..he can't deny that fact..



Just accept your feelings Raman...just follow your heart ...his inner-soul almost pleaded ..



Whats your problem...akhir chahte kya ho tum...he questioned himself looking confused yet adorable...



Just say a proper thank you to her...a proper thank you...not the Raman Kumar Bhalla one...a heartfelt thank you like normal people...the voice directed him ..



Uff...haan bol dunga thank you...he said in an irritating voice ...mujhe us dentist cum lecture queen se dur rehna hoga...main apne aap ko lecture dene laga hu ...khud pagal hain...mujhe bhi pagal kar degi..kya kya soch raha hu tab se...



Raman...



Helloo ...



Ramaaan...


A voice disturbed his chain of thoughts...he came back to the real world and found a bewildered Mihir waving his hands in front of him ..trying to get his attention ...



Chilla Kyu raha hai...behra nehi hu main...he said in an annoying voice.



Tum thik nehi lag rahe ho bhai ...yahan khade khade khud se kya baatein kar rahe ho...Mihir threw a question at him.



Raman remained silent ...as he didnt find any proper answer to this question...if he will discuss the thoughts he had few minutes back...even Mihir will start teasing him...



Chup kyu ho Raman ...aur tumne Bhabhi ko thank you bola...he inquired..



Kaun bhabhi ..kiski bhabhi...he said getting more irritated every passing minute ...confused about his own feelings and behavior lately ..



Ishita Bhabhi...meri bhabhi ..aur kaun...don't tell me you didn't even say thanks to her after she did so much to save you from such a huge loss...Mihir said astounded at his sternness.



Mere bhai ..mujhe maaf karde ...main usse sorry ,thank you ,welcome ,good morning,good night sab bol dunga ...please ab tu mujhe lecture dena start mat kar...ek hi kafi he uske liye..he said folding his hand...as annoyance reached its peak ..



Jise dekho mujhe lecture dene aa jata hai...sab ke sab pagal ho gaye hai...Mihir heard his voice as he saw his retreating figure...He was puzzled to see his friend and soul brother Raman so confused about his own feelings and behavior when is comes to Ishita..



He silently prayed to almighty to show path to these two broken souls...something about Ishita assured him that his friend is in safe hands...these two hearts broken and starving for love are destined to be together ...


To be continued

Precap - Ishita's missing in the riots and her mobile is not reachable ...Raman Kumar Bhalla in action



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hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment ... i will wait for your comments and feedback ...

Please let me know if you want me to continue😳







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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

Chapter - 1- Page 1

Chapter 2 - Page 6

Chapter 3 - Page 14


Edited by _Deepika_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice! The convo between Raman & his inner self made for such a fun read! "Mujhe uss Dentist cum lecture queen se dur rehna chahiye main apne aap ko hi lecture dene laga hu" 😆 😆 😆 Too good!
Do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey nice one. 😃
Rama giving lecture to himself 😆
Loved it...
Update soon... nd if possible do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good initiative hope to hear more from you soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting premise. Raman talking to his inner voice😊

waiting for the next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deepika first of all welcome to forum... 🤗🤗🤗...

omg wht an OS...n the best part u hv kept the characterization intact jst lik in the show..i literally cracked up when u wrote for Raman tht he hv gone mad as he himself hv started givin lectures..tht ws so typical RKB..🤣🤣🤣...

nywz rockin start..!! plz continue soon n pm me too..!! u should write MORE on IshRa post this SS end..!!

thnx for pm too..🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start dear!!!
Loved the way Raman is fighting with his inner feelings!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start dear !!
Raman giving lectures to himself now... Jhansi ki Rani ka sangat ka asar 😆
Do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it especially the beginning really did draw me in.Well done.

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