Hey YHMians...this is the 3rd part of this SS...hope you all will like it...Your feedback will be anticipated 😊
This part is dedicated to all the new friends and readers I made in this amazing forum...this forum has few of the most amazing writers and topic makers 🤗
A very special thanks to Nikki ...this post made by her on Raman inspired me to write this chapter😳❤️
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/3945891/the-slow-transformation-from-shaguns-raman-to-ishitas-raman-c-pg16
Thank you so much for such a lovely response to the previous part😳..sorry for the delay in updating...There is one more part to this SS...Not my fault..i just couldn't control my love for IshRa while writing this part...it became super long...plz bear the spelling mistakes...didn't get time to proof read.😊😊😊
Chapter - 3
Mihir looked at his soul brother..his inspiration...Raman Kumar Bhalla...CEO of the year...the tough business man ...his decisions and understanding result in many successful deals...This Raman looked different...confused about his own emotions..trying hard to keep the tightly closed doors of his heart .. to remain close...failing miserably ...Someone already barged in to his heart ...or He half opened the doors of his heart for her..
Little did he know in this story there was no place for half opening the doors of two hearts ...It was a tale of two broken hearts who tried to remain untouched by each other but failed miserably...These two hearts could see the hidden signs of love scattered in the so called evidences of hatred ...Their meeting,fights ,differences ,hatred and last but not the least their union was destiny's decision ...
It felt like fate took their lives as its case study for school project and kept on experimenting different methods to make the narration intriguing...A women with a fragile heart made of gold and man who claimed to kill his own heart long ago due to endless sufferings and bitterness ...Unknown to all the ignorant mortals two broken souls already found solace in each others embrace betraying their clueless masters ..
The shattered husband who looked at the retreating figure of his treacherous spouse with a man who almost purchased her with materialistic pleasures hardly existed under the skin of present day Raman Kumar Bhalla ...The same person who couldn't even tolerate the face of the little angle in his life only because she reminded him of the painful betrayal he has faced in his dark past ,was searching for options for "how to say Thanks to your Wife " on internet as he couldn't say No to his daughter .He seemed to be a changed man...He was human made of flesh and blood who could feel warmth of affection not a piece of emotionless stone an unfaithful woman left behind her...
Fate grinned at the ignorant yet arrogant man who was trying hard to lie to himself ...about his changed feelings for her...He had absolutely no clues what plans almighty had for him...next few hours the self-proclaimed emotionless man was going to face strongest storm of countless emotions...
His determined fingers danced on the key board of his laptop ..How to say Thanks to your Wife...he clicked the enter button ...The homepage of the website contained some questions site visitors to answer to find the perfect way to express gratefulness to their spouses..
What kind of woman she is ?
1- Submissive
2- Independent
Jhansi ki Rani aur submissive ...huh...he spoke to himself ..
He selected 2nd option...
What kind of temperament she has ?
1-Fiery
2- Sweet
He didn't even realize when his right hand went up and rested on his right cheek caressing it ...The question brought back that slap to his mind ...
How much time it takes to pacify her ,if she is angry?
1- Few hours
2- Few days
He almost saw himself making those failed attempts to make Dosa to pacify his angry Rani of Jhansi...
Few years ka option rakhna chahiye tha in website walon ko ..he mutter under his breath...
How much you will miss her,if she goes away for few days ?
1- Very much
2- Normal
Main aur us lecture queen ko miss karunga ...huh...shanti se rahunga kahin lapata ho jaegi kuch dino ke liye toh... uski nonstop bakwas sun sun ke pak gaya hai insaan...he cursed her silently
Aur yeh kya useless site hai...ek chij saaf saaf answer nehi karna aata aaj kal logon ko...sab question paper thama dete hai...
He would have continued loathing that website but his mobile ring-tone disturbed him...
He answered the call still cursing her and that useless website ..it was Romi at the other end ...
Hello Bhai...
Haan..bol..call kyu kiya...he replied showing his disinterest
Bhai ...woh kisi politician ka murder ho gaya aur yahan kuch areas me dange fasad start ho gaye hai ...
Kya...sab log ghar pe hai na?Sare log thik toh hai na ...
Haan bhai ...sab log ghar pe hai..Papa ne bola aap ko call karke office main ruk jane ke liye bolu...bas aap aur...
Main aur kya?he asked impatiently
Bhai ...bas aap aur bhabhi hi bahar ho...
Kya ..Ishi...Ishita ab tak ghar nehi aayi...he almost screamed on phone..
Nehi bhai...aur Bhabhi ka phone not reachable aa raha hai...wo clinic se bhi kuch der pehle nikal chuki hai...he seemed frightened ...
Uska phone not reachable hai ...aur tu yeh baat mujhe itni der bakwas karne ke baad bata raha ...what the hell...
Bhai..wo
Main use call karne ki koshish karta hu...tum sab apna khayal rakhna aur haan Ishita ke gharwalon ko bhi bata dena ki ghar se na nikle...
Ji Bhai...
He cut the call and dialed her number without loosing a single second...
The number you have dialed is unreachable at this moment ...please try after sometime...the sweet automated voice raised his annoyance to the peak...
Ishitaaa...where the hell are you?
kahan gayi yeh aurat ...
dange fasad main bahar nikalne ki jarurat kya thi use...
Kahan dhundu main ise...
He tried her number for the umpteenth time...He was getting more and more antsy with each passing second...
Why her stupid mobile had to be unreachable when he was dying to hear her voice ...Ishita Iyer..No...Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla ...the most responsible woman on the face of this earth ,at least she believes this ...he scowled ..
Raman ..Bhabhi ka kuch pata chala?he heard Mihir's voice...
Na...uska phone hi nehi lag raha...yeh mobile service walon ko sue kar dena chahiye...hamesha jarurat ke waqt inki suvidhyen radd ho jati hai ...he mocked the irritating voice which was getting repeated again and again on his phone...
Enough...I have to go and search for her...main yahan haath pe haath dhare nehi beth sakta ..pata nehi Ishita kis halat main hogi..kahan hogi...he didn't have any idea ..whom he was giving the explanation to ...
An astounded yet content Mihir looked at his retreating figure...He was not the Raman Bhalla he knew from past six years..this man seemed to have a reincarnation ...she touched his life and everything turned into gold...he could see his elder brother contented even when he had those so called arguments with her...these fights made him feel he belongs to someone...when he had those cute disputations with her over his drinking habits or his late working hours ..it made him feel someone cared for him...he could see change written all over Raman Kumar Bhalla...all credit goes to her...
His car moved towards an unknown end just like its master...who was not able to recognize his destiny...may be because his path was becoming more precious than the final destination...or the hand he held during the journey ...
He never expected her to be this supportive life partner to him or a dutiful daughter in law to his parents...a caring sister in law to his siblings ..he didn't even expect her to be such a perfect mother to his Ruhi ...for him she was just an option to get Ruhi's custody ..but she fitted into all the role so effortlessly that he wondered if she was meant to be in his life ...in his family ...she seemed to be the tender gesture of almighty which touched his paining wounds and they healed leaving behind a soothing sensation in his steel heart ...
Her thoughts occupied his heart whereas his mortal form responded to the devastation in front of him...
To be continued
Precap - Ishita's missing in the riots and her mobile is not reachable ...Raman Kumar Bhalla in action
Sorry for giving the same precap...this part became long so i kept the rest portion for next chapter😊...Next part will be the last one..i promise😆
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Edited by _Deepika_ - 11 years ago
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