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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sudhajo
v.good,,,, Thanku for bringing the feel of love between Ishra...

Thanks, im glad you could see the love :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: luvsagar
Kash they show something like this in the show! It was lovely!

I too want an emotional breakdown / confrontation between Ishu and Raman so they can understand each other's fears / apprehensions and slowly start each other's healing process! Its only when they bare their innermost feelings and fears to each other that the true path to friendship and love will begin and build that solid foundation for their marriage that NO ONE and i mean NO ONE can break!!!

once again a lovely piece of work and hope to see more!!

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Thankyou yaar! 😳

Im glad. IKR!? Im dying for a breakdown/confrontation scene. Really. And jab hardly kabhi hone wala hota hai, toh either Raman doesnt listen, or Ishita isnt in the mood! :|

i absolutely agree, for the healing process to start, they will have to bare their innerself and feelings and thoughts to each other...

Thank you very much again, i hope so too ;)

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Charmgirl2141
Another fabulous Os! 😊 I laughed at the end when Raman was feeling insecure about Ishu's first love.

wow thank you!

haha, glad :)

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

always_a_TV_fan Thank you! :)

KP thanks yaar, hoping for something atleast close to happen.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -Raz-
Reeno? I didn't know you used to wrote [:O]
that was really good..especially portraying thw bBurt from.Ishita side..and the guilt and regretting words from Raman ..i pictured it...
loved it..waiting for more OSs

hah, not a regular, i have quite a few unfinished FFs... this is my second OS on the YHM forum, though 😳

ahaan? thank you so much yaar :) Sure, i'll try.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

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This time I'm not sending you any hugs or kisses only hits & kicks.😡 How could you not let me know about this? Thank god, I came across this earlier lekin I would have never forgiven you if I had missed this OS. 😔

& OMG! Reeno darling, you write so beautifully. LOVED how you expressed Raman & Ishita emotions so brilliantly. I could just picture the entire scene in my head from Raman peeping through the door to Ishu hugging me... I could just picture each and every thing,

The way you expressed Ishu's turmoil of not being able to give birth...to become a Mom, was just PERFECT. No big words used, yet the emotions, feelings were portrayed Amazingly. I just LOVED..LOVED every bit of what you wrote. & YES, I hope there would be such a scene where Ishu breaks down in front of Raman. I seriously think that NEEDS to HAS to HAPPEN.

You should write whenever time permits because you truly have the talent for it. I'm honestly looking forward to reading your work. & the next time, PLEASE let me know. BUT since I'm happy after reading your OS, I'm going to sent you my huggies🤗 🤗 & kissies MUACKS.❤️ ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

swati_bhatia thanks, hopefully :)

jojo1986 thanks :)

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Dhristi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Beautiful os just loved it

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Paru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Hey ... Reeno right??

You write really well. And the both Ishita and Raman speaking having a normal conversation 😳 ... OMG that's like a miracle in Hindi soaps 😆.

Hope they can actually have something like this in the show too. I especially want Raman to give a good public verbal lashing to Vandu's MIL with Subbu watching ... Raman has lashed out to her but never on Ishita's medical condition. He needs to stand up to that idiotic woman and shut her up once & for all.

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

awww its so beautiful dear
muahhh
loved it

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