OS: Night Whispers and the Ashes - Page 4

awesome OS !

how i want to see a proper emotional scene between raman n ishita
we hav seen emotional n hurt RKB most of the tym n ishita turning his angel in disguise ..this tym other way round wid raman playing the angel part
this was a perfect OS with perfect emotions ...ishitas pain and ramans understanding "uske dard ka ehsaas ..mere dil mein hona " type ..jyst perfect !

Woh my gawddd😲😲..Reeenooo😃😃..who said its stupid and disappointing..Sooperbbb👏👏..in Karan's style I will say "Fa-aaan-tas-tic"😃..So beautifully written😊😊..Aaah..me too ..im waiting for a confrontation from Ishu's side..I totally want her to break down and I would love to see Raman hugging her😳❤️..Aaahhh..that hug..I wrote an OS on similar lines but minus the hug..Totally loved the hug❤️..and ooo😃😃..Raman actually asked this😉😉.."By the way... did you say that you never loved Subbu?" ...aaahhh😃..wishful thinking that she didnt have feelings for Subbu eh Raman😆😃..All in all..a brilliant and wonderful OS👍🏼👏..loved it Reeno❤️.thank you🤗...pls do write more often..😊😊

finally found wifi *yayyy*

Originally posted by: serendipity.

im going to reply to EVERYONE this time 😃

and not be a bad girl like last time :P

Awesome OS Dear!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!& pls can U send Me a friend request?

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

OMG 😲😲😲 HIII! :D


reserve 😃

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OMGGG again Reens you write as well? 😲 How did I not know this? :O Youre a bad bad friend then! :P LOL, haan yaar, i mean aise hii, now and then... not exactly a "writer" bas... kabhi kabaar ;) ive written a couple of OSes here before this too :)

this was such a beautiful, sweet and sensitive OS. I loved, LOVED how you have written this. umm YOURE saying this? I didnt know you lied too...? 🤔 but THANK YOU. White lie 🤣

This was keeping IshRa in character and yet, yet it was making a development at the same time. im glad you noticed the same 😳

I cannot wait for something similar to this be seen on the show - an IshRa conversation, a sensitive Raavan - oops Raman and them finally making a breakthrough

And the sweetest bit of this was how Raman initiated the hug and there was no awkwardness between them after Ishita finally accepted the comfort he was WILLING to provide her.

This was about and between them. No third party involved - not even Ruhi. haha yes, i dont know, once i start writing on the people, i forget theres a lot of other people to deal with too, and its just. LOL. But i wanted it to be IshRa and strictly no third parties 😳 Glad you liked it, Aani :)

This was adorable and sweet at the same time, thanks so much for this cute little thing hon

Love ya,

Mwahh

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Hie Buddy! This is certainly one of the finest works on IshRa i have read so far!
Such an emotionally charged story but the end left me with a smile! How i wish we get to see at least one such heartfelt & emotional conversation between IshRa on the show!
Do write more.

Reeno! I have only read the first paragraph and I'm already flawed. Oh dear lord. I can't wait to read the whole OS, I did reserve my spot once upon a time but kya Karu..I'm a lazy reader, but then I saw your comments here and I'm propelled to continue reading!