New FF -~~Secret love~~- part 21 Raman got hurt

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hiii everyone it's my first attempt on
Ishra ff soo plzzz let me know how it is and don't forget to like and comment actually I am a little bit greedy :p so here is my first attempt
PROLOUGE

It was a dark stormy night A girl was running upstairs afraid that if someone gets to know that where she was going...

she was having a secret that she is hiding from everyone... The biggest secret of her life...

As she reached the terrace, she couldn't help but look back one more time, but before she knew it, she was roughly pulled inside...

Her eyes were shut tight, she could bear the door slamming, her racing heart and her heavy breaths could be heard loud and clear...She felt herself being slammed into a wall...

This was it, she was back. Back where she belongs. Back in his arms. Her man, her heart, her soul, her love. Her Secret Love.

The love of her life

Raman kumar bhalla

He covered her mouth with his hands and said

Shhh it's a secret about our love our "secret love" so don't shout

Shhh it's a secret love coming soon :) :)

Sooo how is it plzzz share your thoughts should I continue??

Character sketch and part-1 on page-2
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Part-9 on page-38
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Part-10 on page-40
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Part-11 on page 42
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Part-12 on page-45
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arre wah😃😃 This sounds extremely exciting..⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved the prologue❤️ Pls Pls Pls continue dear😃😃😃
Edited by simples28 - 11 years ago
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interestin start..plz continue soon n add me to ur pm list
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thats exciting...

Please continue soon dear...😊

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very interesting...
😊

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Sound very interesting dear
please do cont soon
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seems interesting... continue soon😊
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yup secret love😳...
i would love to read ur ff dear
so do continue...🤗
hope ishra romance is ahead ☺️
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Characters sketch

Raman kumar bhalla
He is a angry man from outside but inside is very emotional and sensitive he has a daughter name ruhi he loves her a lot shamim left ruhi with Raman ruhi was 8 months old that time he became a very angry man and does not believe in love he thought that love is such waste of time and love is filled of sadness and betrayel but after that he came back from US he met a girl... Her name was ishita she loves ruhi she changed raman first they both hate each other but then they started liking each other... And now he love ruhi and ishita alot and can do anything for them

Ishita swaminathan iyer
She is a very sweet and caring girl she loves her family and kids but she can't be a mother.. She believes in love... She thinks that Love a beautiful thing a beautiful feeling for her... Love is blind.. One day She met a girl name ruhi who stay in her building she loves ruhi a lot and can do anything for ruhi's dad also loves ruhi but ishita hates Raman...but slowly slowly that bitterness between both of them changed into love now she loves ruhi and Raman a lot and can do anything for them

Rest of the characters are same
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prolouge page-1


Thanks for all your love and support and plzzz shower your love and support and blessing like this only and don't forget to like and drop your comment plzzz share your views sorry for any mistakes

Part-1
Raman kept his palm on her mouth.. So that she can't shout but ishita was trying to remove raman'a hand from her mouth... Raman started getting close to ishita... He kissed his hand which was on her mouth she became silent and closed her eyes then Raman removed his Hand from her mouth and covered his hands around her waist and slowly Moved his lips towards her ear and said...

Raman: next time agar late hogi tho main apna hath hata kar kiss karunga (next time if you will be late I will remove my hand and kiss you)

Then he kissed her ear lobe she gasped out then he kept his palms on her cheek and was going to kiss her they were just having inches gap between them he was about to kiss her then suddenly some one shouted...

ISHITA where are you?? Are you up on terrace ishitaaa

Raman and ishita both got startled and ishita shot opened her eyes and said

Ishita: Raman mujhe koi bula raha hai mujhe jana hoga bye (Raman I should go now someone is calling me bye)

She turned and was going and Raman went behind her and catches her hand and said

Raman: itni jaldi...abhi toh Humari first kiss Bhi Nahi hui..(so fast we haven't even kissed yet it's our first kiss)

Ishita: Raman plzz mujhe jane do warna koi Hume dekhlega (Raman plzzz let me go otherwise someone will see us)

Raman: but what about our first kiss

Ishita: next time pakka ab plzz mera hath chodo aur mujhe jane do (next time sure now plzzz leave my hand and let me go)

Raman: no

Ishita: plzzz Raman

She made a puppy face

Raman instantly got melted and said

Raman: ok

Ishita: thank you bye

She turned and was about to go then he said

Raman: wait but only at two conditions

Ishita turned back to see Raman and said

Ishita: what conditions

Raman: 1st condition is that you should kiss me on cheek now..

Ishita: what no

Raman: yes and the 2nd condition is next time when we will meet you should kiss me first

Ishita: kya Mai aisa Nahi karungi (what I will not do this)

Raman: ok then I will also not let you go

Again some one shouted ishita are you there I can hear your voice wait I will come

Ishita quickly went near Raman and kissed on his cheek Raman istantly left her hand then she started walking Raman was facing her back she turned to see Raman who was standing there in surprise she winked and him and chukled then she went from there

Raman started smiling and run his hand through his hair...

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Ishita went out and she saw a girl standing infront of her the girl said

Girl: are you Ms ishita?

Ishita: yes who are you

Girl: ishita Mai suhani tumari school friend Yaad hai hum dono sath Mai padhte the and then Mai US shift hogayi apni college ki padai ke liye (ishita it's me suhani your school friend remember we used to study together and then i got shifted to US for my college studies)

Ishita: oh yes hi suhani kya baat itne din baad meri Yaad ayi Ek phone Bhi toh karsakti thi na(what happened after so many days you came to meet me and you can even call me na)

Suhani: are nai yaar mere pass tera number Bhi nai tha ( no yaar I did not have your number)

Raman was inside he thought of going out then he heard the voice of ishita he thought why is she standing here now how I can go out

Ishita: acha phir yaha kaise ayi (oh really then how you came here)

Suhani: actually jab Mai market Mai thi tab mujhe teri mom dikhe Mai unse jake mili aur unhone hi mujhe invite kiya (actually I was in market I saw your mum and I met her she invited me to your house

Ishita thought of Raman he inside there so she said

Ishita: ok yeh Sab chod aur mere saath ghar chalo waha pe Aram se baatein karinge ( leave it and let's go to my house and their we will sit and talk peacefully)

They both went to ishita'a house her family went out for some occasion she made a excuse and did not went coz she want to me Raman

Suhani: acha ishita yeh bata ki kya tera koi boyfriend shoyfriend hai? (ishita tell me do you have a boyfriend?)

Ishita blushed and said

Ishita: Nahi mera koi boyfriend nai hai (no I don't have any boyfriend)

Suhani: omg look at your blush tu blush kar rahi hai aur Bol rahi hai ki tera koi boyfriend nai hai dekh Jhoot mat Bol Sach bata Bol na Bol na (omg look at your blush you are blushing and saying that don't have any boyfriend see don't lie and say me the truth say na say na)

She started tickling her

Ishita: stop it stopit ok fine yes I have a boyfriend

She said laughingly

Suhani: really kaun hai woh? kaisa dikhta hai? kya kaam karta hai? is he rich? Kaha rehta hai? (Really who is he? how does he looks? what work does he do? Is he rich? Where does he stay?)

Ishita: acha dikhta hai handsome hai business empire ka owner hai mere ghar ke samne hi rehta hai (he is good looking handsome he is owner of a business empire he stays infront of my house)

Suhani: ok toh tum dono kaise mile? Kaha Mille? How did he proposed you? Tumhe usse pyaar kaise hua? Tum dono first date pe Kaha Gaye the? Plzzz mujhe puri story bolo (How did you met? Where did you met? How did he proposed you? Where did you both went for your first date? Plzzz tell me the full story)

Ishita: ok toh suno (ok listen)

Precap: ishra story and some ishra cute moments

Don't forget to like and drop your comments :p


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Edited by sumaiya10 - 11 years ago

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