New FF -~~Secret love~~- part 21 Raman got hurt - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls update soon sumaiya. If u can PM me pls
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Originally posted by: aashid27

Pls update soon sumaiya. If u can PM me pls


I will try my best... ya sure
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Part-1 and character sketch page-2
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3966482&PID=103879548&#p103879548

NOTE: THIS PART I HAVE WRITTEN LONG BUT FROM NEXT PART I WILL WRITE MEDIUM

Part-2

MAHAEPISODE PART

Ishita: Mai aur Raman first time jab mile the tab light chali gayi thi aur mai seedhiyo se niche utar rahi thi tab hi Raman mere side se ja rahe the Maine unhe Nahi dekha waha light Nahi thi is liye Mai seedhiyo ko dekh rahi thi waha light Nahi thi aur Mai daar rahi thi ki agar Mai niche gir gayi toh is liye Mai seedhiyon ko dekh kar utar rahi thi... Raman ne Bhi mujhe Nahi dekha woh phone pe baat kar rahe the Mai jab seedhiyo se utar rahi toh Galti se mera per(leg) unke per(leg) se takraya mera balance out hogaya Mai girne wali thi tab hi Raman ne mujhe pakad liya hum dono Ek dusre ki ankho me dekh rahe the par hum dono Ek dusre ka chehra tikh se dekh Nayi paye the kyunki waha light chali gayi thi...(me and Raman when we first time met at that time there was electricity problem I was going down stairs and Raman came he went from beside me I did not saw him coz I was looking on stairs coz there was no light and I was afraid if I fall down so I was looking down Raman also did not saw me he was talking on phone with mihir his friend and then by mistake my leg hit his leg and I lost my balance I was about to fall when Raman came held me by his arms we both were looking into each other's eyes but we can't see each other face clearly coz there was no electricity)

Suhani: are yaar first time mile aur Ek dusre ko dekh Nahi paye sh@# yaar (sh@# man first time you both met and did not saw each other sh@# man)

Ishita smiled and said

Ishita: Ek Raat ruhi ke daat Mai Bahut dard ho raha tha aur Raman Bahut pareshaan hogaye the aur unhone mujhe call kiya Raman ko mera number kisi call center se Mila then Maine Raman ko Kaha ki woh ruhi ko mere clinic laye thaki Mai ruhi ka check up karlu... Raman ne ruhi ko mere clinic laya usse Maloom Nahi tha ki hum dono same building Mai rehte hai aur padosi Bhi hai Maine unhe yeh Sab bataya...(one night ruhi got a toothache Raman got tensed and he called me he got my number from a call center then I said to Raman to bring ruhi to my clinic so that I can do her check up Raman brought ruhi to my clinic and he did not that we both stay in same building and we both are neighbours..)

Suhani: okay interesting phir age kya hua?? (Okay interesting then what happened next??)

Ishita: Mai aur Raman Ek dusre se Bahut ladte the aur Humari families Bhi Ek dusre se Bahut ladti thi coz hum Sab opposite the Raman and his family were punjabi and me and my family are typical Tamil is liye hum Bahut ladte the...(me and Raman we both used to fight a lot and our families also used to fight coz Raman and his family were punjabis and me and my family are typical Tamil so we both used to fight..)

Suhani: then tum dono Mai pyaar kaise hua?? (then how did you both started loving each other??)

Ishita: ruhi ki Wajah se hum dono Ek dusre se pyaar Karne lage (coz of ruhi we both started loving each other)

Suhani: ruhi?? ab yeh kaun hai? (Ruhi?? Now who is she?)

Ishita: ruhi Raman ki 7 Saal choti beti hai Mai ruhi se Bahut Bahut Bahut zyada pyaar karti Hun aur woh Bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karti hai Mai ruhi ke liye Kuch Bhi karsakti Hun kissi Bhi haad tak ja sakti Hun ruhi he Ek ki Wajah se he Mai Raman ke ghar jati woh mere ghar ayi hai..Raman jis Raman se Mai Bahut nafrat karti thi an Nahi kartiun... Mai uss Raman ke ghar jati thi sirf ruhi ke liye ruhi ki Wajah se he mujhe Raman se Milna padta tha.. mai aur Raman jab he milte the sirf ladai karte the..(ruhi is Raman 7 year old daughter I love ruhi very very very much she also love me the same i can do anything for ruhi... Ruhi is only the reason why I go to raman's to house and ruhi comes to my house... I used to hate Raman before Not now I used to go to ruhi's house only for ruhi coz of ruhi I have to meet Raman.. Me and Raman when ever we used to meet we only fight)

Raman came downstairs and he saw ishita and suhani talking he went to side of the door to listen what they were talking

Suhani: but ishita Raman is married na he has 7 year old daughter

Ishita: he is divorced

Suhani: I think I have listen this names already

Ishita: which names

Suhani: Raman and ruhi...acha leave it ishita Raman divorced hai na toh tum usse pyaar kaise karti ho aur woh Tumhe dokha Bhi de sakta hai (ishita Raman is divorced so how can you love him and he can betray you)

Ishita: Raman mujhe dokha Nahi desakta Mai usse Khud se Bhi zyada pyaar aur bharosa karti Hun Raman Bhi mujhse utna he pyaar aur mujhpe utna he bharosa karte hai kya hua agar woh divorced hai toh har baar zarori nahi hai ki sirf ladka galat ho ladki Bhi toh galat hosakti hai (Raman can't betray me and I love and trust him more than he and I know he also loves me and trust me what happen if he is divorced it's not important that only a man should be wrong women can also be wrong)

Suhani: par ishita tum uspe kaise bharosa karsakti aur pyaar kar sakti ho? Kaise Tumhe yakeen hai ki woh Tumhe dhoka Nahi de sakta? (But ishita how can you trust and love him? How can you say that he won't betray you with full confidence?)

Ishita: Mai Raman pe yakeen karti Hun kyunki mera dil kehta hai (coz my heart says this)

Raman listened all this from standing side of the door tears started coming in his eyes he said to himself

Raman: haan ishita Mai tumse utna he pyaar karta Hun jitna tum karti ho aur Mai Tumse wada karta Hun ki Mai kabhi tumhe dokha Nahi dunga aur yeh sochne pe majboor kabhi Nahi karunga ki tumne mujhse pyaar kyun kiya (yes ishita I also love you that much only and I promise you I will never betray you and will never force you to think that why you loved me)

After saying that Raman went from there

Suhani said silently to ishita

Suhani: Mai toh sirf tumara test le rahi yeh check Karne ki tum usse pyaar karti ho ya Nahi but tum actually usse pyaar karti aur trust Bhi wah kya Nast hai yaar isse kehte hai Sacha pyaar (I was taking a test to check wether you love him or not but you actually love him and trust him wow man)

Suhani: yeh Sab chod aur yeh bata unse tuje propose kaise kiya? (Leave all this and say that how did he proposed you?)

Ishita: Raat Mai ruhi mere ghar ayi woh mere saath khelte khelte sogayi phir Mai usse uske ghar le gayi aur usse uske bed pe sula diya then Mai jab ghar wapis ayi toh mujhe niche Ek chit mili jisme likha tha meet me at terrace alone.. Raman (at night ruhi came to my house she started playing with me and slept then I picked her up and went to her house I made her lye on her bed and sleep then when I went back to my home I saw a chit in that it was written meet me at terrace alone.. Raman)

Suhani: then what happened

Ishita: have some patience...

Ishita:Mai terrace pe gayi then waha andhera that Mai Raman Raman chikh rahi thi (I went to terrace there was all dark I was shouting Raman Raman) then the place lit up with all heart shape balloons falling down and ribbons were hanging the place was looking very beautiful every thing was decorated there were red balloons red ribbons everything was red naturally a smile came on my face seeing that place than a red carpet on floor came infront of me rolling when I started walking on the carpet rose petals started falling on me I was sooo happy seeing that then Raman came infront of me he sat down on his knees and said you are the most beautiful thing that happend in my life you I was a angry heart less man but when you came in my life I got to that I have a heart that only beats for you ishita... You made me a gentle man from angry man.. You made my life heaven.. I don't believe in love I thought love is waste and just regretful thing but when you came I got to know what is love it's not regretful it's meaning ful whenever Every second I see you I fall in love with you with out you I was empty without you I was lonely would you like to fill my emptiness and my loneliness would you like to be mine be my soulmate???

Tears started falling from ishita'a eyes she quickly wiped it off then said

Ishita: Kaha se padke aye oh yeh Sab (from where have you read all this)

Raman got up and said

Raman: kya koi jawab hai kya

Suhani: wait wait you instead of saying yes you asked from were have you read all this

Ishita: yes kyun kya hua (yes why what happen?)

Suhani: pagal aise koi bolta hai (mad anyone does say like this

Ishita: yes me now listen

Raman: yeh koi jawab hai itni mushkil se Yaad kiya tha aur tum yeh Bol rahi jawab do na (is this any answer from so much hardwork I read that now give me answer)

Ishita: pehele yeh bolo Kaha se Yaad kiya phir jawab dungi (first say from where you read all this then I will give you the answer)

Raman: Internet but jo Kuch Bhi Kaha dil se Kaha ishita (Internet but what ever I said it was from my heart)

Raman moved aside and raised his hand he pointed towards down on floor there was a heart made by red colour rose petals on that heart there was a written I love you ishita with lit up diya

Ishita: I love you too

They both hugged each other

Ishita: Raman waise tum aaj itne romantic kaise? (Raman how did you became so romantic?)

Raman: jab he Tumhe dekhte Hun to romance ubhar kar ata hai..(whenever I see you my romance comes naturally)

Ishita: oh really

Raman: yes

Ishita: and this is how he proposed me

Suhani: awww how romantic...

Precap: ishra moments

NOTE: THIS PART I HAVE WRITTEN LONG BUT FROM NEXT PART I WILL WRITE MEDIUM


Part-3 page-11
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3966482&TPN=11&#p104428534
Edited by sumaiya10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Promo

It was welcome party of suhani...suhani said So today we will play antakshiri

Raman dancing on o tera dhyana Kidar hai yeh tera hero idhar

ashok and shagun are also there
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
awesome yaar ... continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful part.😊
Continue soon. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome...

loved it...👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww so sweet it was n raman proposed her hayeee so great n pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it . Pls do PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow so romantic.pls continue soon,waitin fr ishra moments.pls PM me hw much ever u update

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