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DON't-ASK-IT

@Sara_DONT_ASK

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+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Morgoth
Miz Comb, you should write more of THIS stuff instead of your bomb-don stuff. Seriously.

You have a clear-cut talent that you could develop. Whether you do it or not remains up to you.

My daddy (Bhaskar.T) says this shud be my first and last such post....😳😛...He likes his beta...more....playing with guns n bombs stuff...😆😆 j/k

Thank you for the comments T Dot Massi...😳...and the 2 things you pointed out...yeah...woh ache ache phrases books mein hi read..😆😆...and by serene i meant to say that the undisturbed look she had on her face....as she had died...his yelling and shouting didn't affect her in any way..!!! And that scared look..haunting in dreams....i meant...her condition due to taking drugs...!!!

I guess cudnt phrase out the thoughts properly...😳..Still thanks for reading it and telling me my mistakes..!!!

Edited by Saara COMB - 17 years ago

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Mosammad

@Mosammad

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Oye Donny, its very emotional...since when are you emotional? 😆 😆

Good job, donny billi! 👏 👏 Whoever "she" may be, she definitely is a drug addict and you put together the words well! 😃

Indeed, a bittersweet experience 😛
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OMG>>>I know what this is about...I shud know this all along...DONNY ki bacchi...kithni chalak hai thu! GOod Good, ur doing good!😆

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

#23

Donnyjeee...haila...Don se writer??? 🤓

Since when?

Well, beautifully written part, really descriptive, loved loved reading each and every part of the story 👏

Fantastic 👏

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nidhi2013

@nidhi2013

Stunner

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

very well written donny 😊

the way u describe feeling is too gd 😳

like bb said i agree to him 😆

apun ko na dongiri rapcheek lagta hain 😛 (i tried 😆 )

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advil

@advil

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

Munni,

Very well written.👏 Now, this is the true face of life. what you see and what you get, entirely different.... and then,all one is left with thinking is - what if......

isiliye.......😆 keep away and never propose 😆

Oye...u sound nice in a happy mood...yeh dard shard leave for the majnus and u stay tapori....

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Sana

@natasshafan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

OMG Saara!😭 Amazingggg story... I love ur writing style...👏 The the theme was great too...😳

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JK Dhillon

@Angelic_J

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#27

Hawwwwww I wasnt aware the Don cud write so well :O

Amazing story donnu👏 Beautifully expressed as well👏 Loved reading it😃

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Angelic

@Angelic_A

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#28

Awww well written. 👏 👏 you should def consider writing more. 😳 👏 👏

p.s. i never knew that donny would write that well. 😆

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Big Story..

@Mini786

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#29

Nicely written!
I really liked it, touched me!
Great going :]

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noodles

@noodles

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#30

Wow! That's was very beautifully written. 👏 It was very sad though, but I guess that's life. Things like these happen to so many people.

Wonderful job! 😃

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