Life at 16... Note on Page 34 - IMP!!!!!! - Page 8

Originally posted by: shriyaroxxx

😲 ysh... u've written the nxt three chapters & still haven't posted them? u want me to kill u or sumthing... this is not gonna wrk, alright😒😒

post d next part jaldi.... i have told u, i have warned u... m not d sorting hat, but let the writing now begin😆

uh-oh 😕 looks lyk i shouldnt have opened my big bragging mouth... but anyway all in good time dears *gives wise look and starts to meditate*

[Quote=Neiwbie Nagger]
Shriya is rite!
You've written the next 3 chapters, and you haven't posted? i beliv thts ryt 😕 😆
Get ready for a lonnnng PM young lady!!
😛 i braced myself but you didnt send me one yet dear 😆...
-Newbie-Nagger-who-is-about-to-send-Ysh-a-long-PM-
-❤️Head-Nagger-who-is-still-waiting-for-her-long-PM❤️- [/quote]

PS: if i know anything bout my neiwbie nagger the PM is going to be filled with CTRL+V of 'POST' 😛

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Originally posted by: xMarauderx

Hey yshuuuuuuu...salut!!!

Salute to u too madam 😛

I came on to Tales Corner(after niyu explained to me what it is n how to find it😆😆😆) n I read ur fic all today It's amazing👏👏👏

Awwww 😳 thankie james 😳 🤗 🤗

I love Ryan/Alex😳😳😳 (no surprise there😆😆 as I love love/hate..I think I told u that😆😆😆)

yes you did 😆😆😆*Sigh* dont we all love that type❤️..... 8->

Can't wait to see what happens next with Scott n Sharon(hey even their current BF/GF have the same initial "S")😉

😆 trust you to find that out... it was obvoiusly subconcious but still... 😆😆😆

I was initially very confused with all the characters but after reading through all....I like the character of Alexis very much😳 Her story seems the most interesting. Yea she is my personal favorite... 😳espicially what i have in store for her makes her my best charector ever😉😉... but i had better not ignore the others in the go 😕
I like Rhea too...she luks cute..n I love Kevin..the guy in d pic u hv used is so cute!

I know 😳 i lub him cho much 😳 hes that hero of princess diaries and luks THE best in tht pic😳... actually i think Ryan luks better but not so much in the pic i used there.. u see the one i'll show wen i cum online... he luks so ❤️ in tht... 😆

One more thingy....why does Ryan's elder sis Cathy n Hilary's mom Lynda looks similar???😕

Tee heee tee hee 😃 i guessed sum1 would guess... yea its the same person :-< actually i started putting it together for fun and then i thought ill chuck the story away... as u might have seen plenty of pics cum from Full House... iw ould have used the entire FRIENDS cast too but then tht would be a little too 'wogay'... 😆 i just used the random pics i had on the comp and so at a shortage i used different ages of the same person for them... 😆

Hilly is a nice nickname tho😆😆😆 I wonder she doesen't protest against Ryan though for that name!😆😆😆

😆 i think Hilly's cute too for Hilary cos i cant imagine writing Hil all the time... everyone calls her Hily so i odnt think she'll protest...

Now that u hv come back...update fasttt!!!😳

Yes Mam!!! 😆 lets see... 😉 ok ok its not like ill be able to emerge alive if i stall posting but its fun to do tht... 😛

I agree with niyuuu...nice description of Ryan/Alexis, Ashi-Yuvi, Lily/James...etc etc😆😆😆

I luv it too... uh-oh i didnt reply to niyu's review😕... but anyways shes not here to check all that so i think ill run off and reply to it now...😃

yea i luv the way she put it... 😆 and it so dus apply to our most favorite pairs too 😳😳😳

❤️Ysh🤗❤️

Umm....i could make out it was Rachel Dunst coz she's d heroine of Spiderman..n I hv watched it like.....uncountable times 😆 😆 😆

😆 😆 yea i want to watch it too cos niyu made me curious... 😛
anyways...

Ysh reporting for duty Maam(s)... yea im gonna update now 😳 😳 i think this is gonna be a short part but i promise this is totally worth it for the later ones...oh and btw i found the pic of the person i used for Ryan that i luv so much... 😳 😳 so i added him to the flow chart instead of the other not-so-hunky pic... nw this is y i luv ryan 😳 >> http://i13.tinypic.com/4h9y9op.jpg
ok so ppl please read and review this chapter... and i wish i could wait for Sam but i knw shez gona b a long while and newbie nagger will bite my head off 😆
ok ok without furthur ado...

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PART 5

Alex hated this part of the day most. Going home. She did not want to go to face her so-called step-mother. She hoped that David would be home so she wouldn't have to make conversation with her… it was already 8:30 and she had tried to while away as much time as possible playing tennis at Kevin's. She pushed the door open and walked into the hall, hoping to get to her room quickly.

"Hey David!" she said brightly, stopping as she spotted her brother watching TV.

"Hey Alex… somebody called for you… Pam wrote the number down you can ask her…"

"Who was it?" she asked coldly at the mention of Pam.

"I don't know… you can ask Pam…" he said switching channels. Alex exhaled slowly as she walked into the kitchen where she knew Pam was.

"Hey… who called for me?" she asked in a low voice.

"Some guy called Scott Truscott. I have his number down if you want to call him back…" she said.

"We are having salad, again?" she complained as she caught sight of what Pam was making.

"Yes…" she sighed sounding tired, "I couldn't get anything ready in such a short time…"

"Yea you spend all your time at your office and what do you expect…" she muttered.

"I heard that!" said Pam looking at Alex crossly. She was tired and in no mood to be nice.

"Well I said it aloud!" shot back Alex scowling.

"What is your problem?" asked Pam indignantly, setting her cloth down and looking at Alex angrily.

"My problem? You want to know my problem? I'll tell you my problem. My problem is that I have been eating salad for 3 days. My problem is that I am an orphan. My problem is that you think you can replace my mother when all you want is my father's money. My problem is that-" here Alex couldn't go on for she was chocking. She so badly didn't want to cry in front of Pam.

"You want to talk problems? Let's talk problems young lady. I have problems too. My problem is that I lost my husband 8 months ago and now I have to deal with his stubborn and badly behaved daughter!" shouted Pam, losing her cool. David turned off the television and turned around, surprised that Pam lost her cool.

"Your husband was my father. And you never should have married him in the first place!" yelled back Alex.

"Don't you dare tell me what to do and what not to do. I could have easily sent you away to some boarding school. But I am here and working overtime so that you could go to school and have a comfortable life. Why the hell don't you understand that? You think you are having problems? Try being a single parent to a child like you, who is not even your own! I have tried my best with you. I understand that you lost your parents and all but that gives you no damn excuse to be downright rude and ungrateful!" a deadening silence followed Pam's words at the end of which Alex wordlessly turned around and ran to her room. Pam sighed and sat down, frustrated and disappointed with herself. David walked around and stood in front of Pam.

"I blew it! I was handling it right all along and I blew it now!" she whispered.

"Alex needed that. She has had more than enough time to pull herself together and be nice to you," said David, "I always thought you were too soft on her!"

"What did you expect me to be to a child who has lost both her parents in the span of six years?"

"I lost both parents in the span of six years and you don't see me behave badly!" reasoned David.

"You're different. Alex is a hot headed person and has not accepted me-"

"It's her problem! I think that what you did today was right Pam. She needed a taste of that! She needed a shock... don't fret too much over it! And let me go up and make sure my little sister has not wrecked her room in her anger!" said David, patting Pam on the back and turned to go upstairs.

He shook his head, vexed with his sister. So far Pam had been nothing but nice to her. She hadn't raised her voice even once and had accepted Alex's rebellious nature. He had always wanted to try a shock treatment with her but he had not known how to go about it. And now that it had come from Pam, he felt that its impact would be stronger, for Pam was hardly the person to raise her voice. His sister had worried him for a long time, ever since she had decided that she would do what she wanted. He still hadn't forgotten the first time she came down wearing those hideous clothes just because Pam had complimented her clothes the day before. It was only because he had faith in her friends that his worry lessened. She was so hot headed and there was no saying what she would do next… He knocked her door and waited for a response.

"Alex?" he called and knocked louder, "Alex, are you there?" he kept his ear close to the door, trying to listen for any sound from inside that told him his sister was there. When he heard nothing his heart quickened, apprehensive. "Alex, I'm coming in now!" and giving a moments gap he opened the door, glad that she hadn't locked it from inside. "Alex-" He stopped short when he saw that the room was empty. As an instinct he checked to see if she was there in the bathroom but the open door told him that she wasn't there either. He saw that the things by the window ledge had been thrown down hurriedly and the open window gave him the answer.

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"Kevin! Kev… when is dad coming home?" asked Carol, his younger sister. Carol Taylor was five years younger to him. With long blonde hair and chubby cheeks, eleven year old Carol was indeed a cheerful spirit. Kevin's parents divorced when he was twelve and they both were living with their father. Their mother had a traveling job and being the career minded person she was, their parents had decided to split on good terms. The father hadn't remarried and it was just the three of them in the house.

"Well he said he had a late meeting and asked us to order pizza for dinner!" said Kevin as he lazily changed the channel and turned back to his math homework.

"I need to ask him to sign the permission form for the Class Trip next week to the California Zoo."

"Is Fred coming?" teased Kevin. Fred was Carol's classmate and they sort of liked each other.

"Everyone is going!" said Carol nonchalantly, dodging the assault, "By the way Kev, how's Rhea?" she asked innocently.

"Shut up!" he said, throwing a cushion at her. Carol caught the cushion and threw it back to him. The phone rang and Carol reached out for it.

"Yes… one minute, who shall I say is calling?" she covered the receiver with her hand and whispered to Kevin, "Kev, its David, Alex's brother!" Kevin frowned in confusion as he got up to take the call.

"Hello? Yea… what? No, she's not here… I'm coming over right now!" he hung up the phone and turned to Carol who was looking at him. "Carry, you can take care of yourself for half an hour? Actually, no," he said changing his mind, "You go and stay next door with Pam for half an hour and I'll be back. If you want to reach me, call my cell!"

"What happened?" she asked, as Kevin grabbed the key and rushed her out of the house.

"Alex and Pam had a major blowout and now she's missing!" he explained as he hurried her to Alex's house. He met David outside the house and sent Carol inside.

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so guys?

what say???

-❤️Ysh❤️-

Aww...nice chapter! I was waiting for a blow out from Pam and Alex...amazing to see it happen! What I like is how nicely u hv kept the character's in grey n not let them go any where towards either white or black.👏👏👏

I'm glad Pam's not a sati savitri like...ermm "You Know Who"😆 n that she had her war of words!😃😆😆

I can sor of relate to Alex as well...even though she's way outta line...she just wants things to go back to normal..with her mom n dad there and as a family.

Alex ran away from home...............am liking this character more n more😉😳 I love rebels!😳

Go on Alex baby!😆😆😆

Newbie Nagger is still working on the PM, even tho senior nagger did her job and did it quite well!
Loved the chapter!!
Alex...wat should i say, a rebellious lil girl she is!
But i like her!!
Hmmm interesting, very interesting!
I loved the chapter and am waiting for the next one!!
Continue fast plesh!
*EDIT*
You have my PM waiting for you in your inbox!
😃

-Tanu-

heyyy..i finnaly gt time to read d story completely today..wenever i used to strt d record was i left it midwy nd had to strt all over agn 😆 its toooo goood 😃 👏 👏 umm who i like tuffie 😆 i like ryan alex like many here 😳 😆 😆 rhea isnt bad too kevin is nice alex rocks ryan is cute 😳 😆 😆 baa r im confuse nd muddled up now

Originally posted by: uvcraziestfan

heyyy..i finnaly gt time to read d story completely today..wenever i used to strt d record was i left it midwy nd had to strt all over agn 😆 its toooo goood 😃 👏 👏 umm who i like tuffie 😆 i like ryan alex like many here 😳 😆 😆 rhea isnt bad too kevin is nice alex rocks ryan is cute 😳 😆 😆 baa r im confuse nd muddled up now

I was just about to give u dis linkie shellzy😆😆 After hearing ur mediator comment..I thought..so shellzy can read too huh😉😆😆

so finally u updated huh ysh 😳 .....1 more day late & i swear i'd have killed u 😉... anyway, a very interesting chapter, & i really liked it 😊 ..... & i think i hv an idea about whr alex went.... whr did u say ryan lived agn? 😉 😳