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Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: vyapti

When people hurt me,

You wipe my tears.

Now that I am shedding tears

Because I have done something

That will hurt you,

To whom should I

Go for consolation?

It sounds like you would like to tell more, but stopped in the middle. You left it to the reader to think about it! A nice poem.
Edited by Viswasruti - 4 months ago
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Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

It sounds like you would like to tell more, but stopped in the middle. You left it to the reader to think about it! A nice poem.

Yes, I stopped in the middle. Guilt and shame stifles our voice and clouds our mind. I could not properly express what I wanted to express.


Thank you dear 💕💕

Edited by vyapti - 4 months ago
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Posted: 4 months ago

I cant comment because I also many times end up hurting those who love me.

Edited by Sutapasima - 4 months ago
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Posted: 4 months ago

We all do dear. Sometimes we hurt them by mistake, sometimes we hurt them because we have no other choice. That is what makes us human.

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Posted: 3 months ago

What will I get, dear, if I don't remain honest?

So many things, dear, so many things.

It is just that if by chance

I meet you again, then

I will have to look in another direction

And pretend that I have not noticed you.


What will I get, dear, if I remain honest?

Nothing, dear, nothing.

But whenever I wish

I will be able to look into your eyes

And complain, "You have failed me."

Also whenever I will have little time for myself

I will have the right to

Rush into your open arms.

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Posted: 3 months ago

This is really wonderful! <3

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 3 months ago

A soul's struggle to overcome doubt and hesitation is expressed in a beautiful way. This is a very good poem, Nibedita. smiley27

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Posted: 2 months ago

You are beautiful;

I fall in love with you

Again and again.

I don't know how to

Put kohl on my eyes;

Keep your fingers there

And let the world see

How beautiful I am!

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 2 months ago

Originally posted by: vyapti

You are beautiful;

I fall in love with you

Again and again.

I don't know how to

Put kohl on my eyes;

Keep your fingers there

And let the world see

How beautiful I am!

Instead of kohl, keep his fingers there.... lovely description. Well written one dear. smiley31
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Posted: 27 days ago

So many months were spent in numbness.


As unbearable pain courses through my body,

I feel alive again.

As I shriek for help

I realise that

I have not lost my voice.

As my skin searches for your touch

I realise that

I have not lost my need for you.


Pain runs through me,

I see pain everywhere.

As I see the vastness of pain,

As I see how small I am,

Suddenly the face of happiness

Comes again before my eyes.

Edited by vyapti - 27 days ago

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