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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fantastic OS Proteeti👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is one brilliant write up👏
Lovedd reading it❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic OS Proteeti👏


Thanks Noniedi!

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-

This is one brilliant write up👏

Lovedd reading it❤️


I'm glad you liked it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting os proteeti
Loved itt soo much...
Very well written
Thanks alot for pm sweetu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: enthusiastic

Interesting os proteeti

Loved itt soo much...
Very well written
Thanks alot for pm sweetu


Thank you so much Parudi!

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

Amazing OS just loved it


Thanks Jennidi! <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Even though I come to IF very often, I always find my way back to your threads proteeti. You're a true gem and very talented.
This one was brilliant with a clean end!!
Proud of you.
Please keep pming me for your works, I'll always look forward to them .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Even though I come to IF very often, I always find my way back to your threads proteeti. You're a true gem and very talented.

This one was brilliant with a clean end!!
Proud of you.
Please keep pming me for your works, I'll always look forward to them .


Thank you so much Di! :D
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Posted: 7 years ago
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WOW ! This is so deep !
Especially these lines have totally got me :

"Sophie had already been tottering over the edge of sanity" ;

"She never understood why she was always so conflicted."

"She was always too confused with the intricacies of societal life."

The topic 'Philo-Sophia' itself is just very nice and intriguing ! 😊

And I love how you used GREY colored fonts for writing this one-shot ! Very symbolic ! 😊

I get Sophie but hard to digest that her brother became the victim !

If only her mother had given some extra attention to her mental state much earlier !


Anyways ... Great one-shot my friend ! 👏
You have totally brought out the essence of the genre you picked for your writing , that too in a very short story! 😊 Love it 👍🏼
It's not easy to write ONE-SHOT on psycho thriller but you just totally nailed it ! 👏


& Btw... I'm not sure what or how to fill up the end . I'm in a quiet dilemma about Sophie's execution 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Such an awesome one shot.


Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: Rudrasa999

WOW ! This is so deep !

Especially these lines have totally got me :

"Sophie had already been tottering over the edge of sanity" ;

"She never understood why she was always so conflicted."

"She was always too confused with the intricacies of societal life."

The topic 'Philo-Sophia' itself is just very nice and intriguing ! 😊

And I love how you used GREY colored fonts for writing this one-shot ! Very symbolic ! 😊

I get Sophie but hard to digest that her brother became the victim !

If only her mother had given some extra attention to her mental state much earlier !


Anyways ... Great one-shot my friend ! 👏
You have totally brought out the essence of the genre you picked for your writing , that too in a very short story! 😊 Love it 👍🏼
It's not easy to write ONE-SHOT on psycho thriller but you just totally nailed it ! 👏


& Btw... I'm not sure what or how to fill up the end . I'm in a quiet dilemma about Sophie's execution 😆


Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked my work! As for the ending, you are free to imagine anything...😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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superb os
loved it
will shopie be excecuted?
superb written...well balanced.
loved it
thanks for pm.

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