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MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Another interesting shot from you Pro! Wonderfully written. I don't understand how the hell you manage to fit so much within these few words. Its so admirable.

The os was one of a kind. Loved the way you have shown the conflict within Sophia. This kinda scared me. Was she always troubled or so?

And what the hell was that? You end it here? Just like that. That is so not fair. 😡 i hate open ending stories. 😳

Anways great job! Looking forward for more such shots. And if you can please write a sequence to the same. With more insight to Sophia and her troubling mind.

Sam

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Posted: 7 years ago

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pcnsb

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

This was such an amazing read Proteeti! 😊

Such beautifully balanced write up. 👏👏

Loved it! ❤️

Keep Writing.

Nandini

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Madhuri

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

A gripping narrative of a short life's happenings in brief! Crime and punishment magnified the storyline! Love your style of writing Radhika.🤗

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Mahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Unress

Coo, this was totally out of the blue and hard hitting! Sophie's confusion but not so guilty was well framed. I wonder what could be the reason of it in detail though :P

Poor Robert (unless he's at fault). And the ultimatum but popularity. Loved the conflicting and ironic situations here! <3

⭐️

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Jayeeta Paul

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Awesome os...so shocking of Sophie to kill her own brother whe wasn't at fault...I think it's fair enough if she's been executed...thank u 4 pm...

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Zephyr.
Oh so juvenile offence... It was a very balanced write-up... I loved how you didn't support Sophie neither you blamed only her! Very well written narrative <3

Thank you Sans di! I'm glad you liked it! 😳

Originally posted by: ...OohLaLa...
That last line...
Totally unexpected
I loved it ❤️

Thanks Nandu! <3

Originally posted by: _Meena_
superb OS

Thank you Meenadi! <3

Originally posted by: Ranbirrocks
This was interesting read. Will Sophie be executed?🤔

Thanks Ritzidi!

And that, is up to your imagination. I've left it open. 😃

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SilverBell
Very Interesting.
What Will Happen To Sophie?

Thank you Di! That is open for you to imagine. :)

Originally posted by: 2filmy
this is so interesting and intriguing
you have written it so well

Thank you so very much! <3

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD
Beautiful Radhika 😊

Thanks Goldiedi! <3

Originally posted by: .Archangel.
Another Interesting Read from you, Choti. <3
I love how you presented a balanced view of her juvenile crime, neither you supported her nor you blamed her.

Loved It. ❤️
Keep Writing.
Thanks For Pm.

Thanks Shanayadi! I'm glad you liked it! <3

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun
Another interesting shot from you Pro! Wonderfully written. I don't understand how the hell you manage to fit so much within these few words. Its so admirable.
The os was one of a kind. Loved the way you have shown the conflict within Sophia. This kinda scared me. Was she always troubled or so?
And what the hell was that? You end it here? Just like that. That is so not fair. 😡 i hate open ending stories. 😳
Anways great job! Looking forward for more such shots. And if you can please write a sequence to the same. With more insight to Sophia and her troubling mind.
Sam

Awwie Sam! Your reviews are always so nice! Thank you ri! <3

I intended it to be like that...and write a sequel in your head if you want. 😛😆

Originally posted by: Sonatia
Such an awesome one shot , totally loved it . I missed your stories so much.
Loved the way with your words and how short and crispy it is . But the last line gave me goosebumps .
Where do you get such awesome ideas ?
I can't wait for the next stories . 😉

Thank you so much ri Mou! I'm so happy you liked it! <3

Originally posted by: pcnsb
This was such an amazing read Proteeti! 😊
Such beautifully balanced write up. 👏👏

Loved it! ❤️

Keep Writing.
Nandini

Thank you so much Nandini!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Viswasruti
A gripping narrative of a short life's happenings in brief! Crime and punishment magnified the storyline! Love your style of writing Radhika.🤗

Thank you Madhuri aunty! I'm glad you liked it. :D

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.
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Coo, this was totally out of the blue and hard hitting! Sophie's confusion but not so guilty was well framed. I wonder what could be the reason of it in detail though :P

Poor Robert (unless he's at fault). And the ultimatum but popularity. Loved the conflicting and ironic situations here! <3

⭐️

Thank you ri Mahi!

Neither Robert nor Sophie is at fault here. Sophie was mentally disturbed, tottering over the edge of sanity, while Robert happened to be the unfortunate victim of her outburst. :)

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06
Awesome os...so shocking of Sophie to kill her own brother whe wasn't at fault...I think it's fair enough if she's been executed...thank u 4 pm...

Thank you! Sophie here, is a mentally disturbed kid. Her brother was only unfortunate to have rubbed her up the wrong way.

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