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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello people. This concept has been giving me sleepless nights and then I finally decided to scribble this up. Constructive criticism is always welcome!




"I will confess today "



She stood at the juncture of platform 5 , the very same platform which was the witness of her unattainable and unrequited predilection. The subject of her deep rumination was expected across her lair at sharp half past eight . The clock was stationed right before her undaunted eyes , for which is she was forever indebted lest she missed the impending arrival.



" Must be running late"



Her valiant adjuration flattered when it met the eyes of unfamiliar entities and failed to meet the desired destination. The hustle -bustle of the platform was immune to her disquietude. Indebtedness to the mighty clock turned into the pool of uncertainties and reservations. The whirlwind of emotions then started reasoning with the possibilities of the reason of delay. The infamous traffic was summoned to the court of late arrivals, unruly fights on the road were also not spared . While awaiting for the impatient judgement the advent of familiar face adjourned the decision to fools' land.



"Finally !"



She shook herself from the reverie and took determined steps to comply with her resolute undertaking. As soon as she neared her destination , she ceased and walked away from him.




"Not today , maybe tomorrow "




AN - this was all from my end now readers over to you hate it? Like it? You have all the freedom.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear Cumber,
A very short shot, almost like a double drabble - it was nice, the determination, moving to frustration and ending with procrastination. Strange, we all crave for love, accept that love makes life worthwhile and yet hesitate to admit that we love someone. The irony of life.

Neatly written.

Best Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Cumber,

A very short shot, almost like a double drabble - it was nice, the determination, moving to frustration and ending with procrastination. Strange, we all crave for love, accept that love makes life worthwhile and yet hesitate to admit that we love someone. The irony of life.

Neatly written.

Best Nyna


Nyna,
Thank you for being here and connecting the dots so eloquently.
Your words make my day.

Cumber
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonatia

Awesome piece of brilliance. The words are doing magic here . Keep writing

Thank you!
I hope to keep up with writing too:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazingly Written!
Emotions were well portrayed here from determination to reluctance of confession.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Epithymia--

Amazingly Written!

Emotions were well portrayed here from determination to reluctance of confession.

Thank you!
I appreciate your warm words :)

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