Mehbeer ff: The Revenge For Love chp 3 till 30 (Completed) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Nice update
Meher have second thoughts whether she can trust abeer fully again that he won't repeat his past mistakes
Abeer thinking too that he needs to win her again
Wow what a stroke his father brought idea of marrying meher to him
Does he suspect if so has he changed or will he again try something
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Chp 15

-Meher's POV:
*I cried whole journey and didn't even glanced at Abeer. I wasn't even sobbing. He placed his hand on my shoulder.
He: baby r u ok?
Me: hmm main theek hoon
He: yahan dekho
I quickly wiped my tears and looked at him, he touched my cheek and showed me my tear.
He: to phir yeh kya hai?
Me: aankh mein kachra chala gaya tha
He: I know u r hurt because of me, but I will make everything fine, don't worry.
He said assuring me. How does he know what I feel? I didn't knew he's a mind reader as well. He held the back of my head pulling me closer and kissed me on my forehead. Suddenly I felt a rush of feelings inside me, I felt relieved, hopeful, blessed all of a sudden and passed him a weak smile. We reached and he went out of the car and came towards my door and opened it. He forwarded his hand and I placed my hand in his hand, he pulled me a little making me stand and closed the door. He is treating me like a princess just like the first time we met. We went together towards the entrance of the house and were welcomed with flower rain. Soon the graha pravesh and kumkum feet dipping ritual was also done, I went forward with Abeer and there was again a plate of kumkum on the small cabinet.
Me: iska kia karun?
I asked Abeer. He signed me to dip my hands in it and to place my hands on wall leaving my hand marks on it. I did same. Soon we went upstairs towards our room. As soon we reached, I started interrogating him.
Me: uncle ko mere haath k nishaan se pta to nh chalega k main Shalini hoon?
He looked at me in disbelief, I looked away in embarrassment. He bursted out laughing and sat next to me.
He: (still laughing) did u give your fingerprints to papa? Tumne koi crime kia hai kya?

He again laughed on me.
He: kitni cute ho tum.
Me: I m serious
He continued laughing.
Me: arey kya?
I asked irritatingly.
He: sorry...he won't know don't worry.
Me: what to do about revenge?
He: do as I said, be really sweet and reveal in the end u r Shalini, he will apologize for sure.
Me: lekin agar nh kia to?
He: we will threaten him.
Me: lekin Abeer, I feel bad for u, Jo bhi mere sath hua uski waja se tum apne papa se door hogaye.

I really meant what I said, only I should take revenge, not he. Its my fight.
He: nh, mujhe ye krna hai, tumhe kho chuka hota main ab tak unki planning ki waja se, don't u remember? I slapped u and made u leave the house, then that accident then u acted to be dead because of me...then I found u n u told everything, badi mushkil se tum wapis ayi ho
He looked away and I went to the side where he was looking looked in his eyes.
Me: phir ro rahay ho tum, kia yr Abeer, baby don't cry na
He continued crying and I hugged him tightly and he hugged me even more tight.
Me: I m here na, don't cry.
He: chaho to mujhe maaf mt krna
Me: I will kill u abb esa kuchh kaha to...smile na plz.
He didn't said anything and I tickled him to make him laugh, majaal hai k ek smile bhi di ho, rotu kab tk royega us cheez k liye jis baat pe kbka maaf krchuki hoon? God help me. Then I got an idea.
Me: bidaai meri hui hai, ro tum rahay ho jaise k tumhari hui ho...plz stop it na.
He: plz let me cry.
He held me more tight and I couldn't breathe now.
Me: theek hai ro lo lekin plz loosen your grip, I can't breathe

Again he didn't do what I said. Bhagwan ji plz mujhe abhi apne pass mat Lena nh to yeh rotu or bhi roega or main chain se marr bhi nh paungi...umm shut up my stupid heart, don't make me laugh at this serious time. Again I thought of some joke to make him laugh. I started singing.
Me: hasste hasste rona seekho, rote rote hassna seekho

No response, uhhh, kru to kia kru? Kisko bolun? Then I said in his ear.
Me: breaking news, ladki ki bidai pe ldka roraha hai.
He: Meher yr u r mad
He said finally breaking the hug.
Me: thank God u stopped, I was about to die because of ur tight hug, haha
He glared at me as I said the word die.
Me: I m going to change my clothes..c u later
I went to washroom laughingly.
End of POV.

Abeer's POV:
Mujhe itna Rona raha hai or madam has rahi hain... I heard faint laughter sound from washroom. I said irritatingly.
Me: stop laughing.
She: Abeer plz yr don't cry baby i love u
She said while giggling and came out of washroom and sat in front of me.
She: everything will be fine, u gave me hope n u r crying? Plz don't cry.
She cupped my cheeks. I wiped my tears after crying more and she hugged me running her fingers in my hair. After sometime she broke the hug.
She: tum ja kr fresh hojao, I will bring something for u.
She went and I went to freshen up. When I came out of washroom and accidentally collided with her, she had a food plate with her.
Me: I m sorry, tumhe lagi to nh?
She: no...m OK, tum khana khalo main neeche jarahi hoon, Maa ko kaam hoga na mujhse.

She went and I felt worried for her, kahin papa ne usse kuchh kehdia to? I went after her and saw her going to kitchen, she was going when papa stopped her. Oh God.
Papa: when did u make this tattoo? Its just like Shalini's tattoo.



Meher freezes on her place hearing this and the screen freezes on her worried face.

Edited by salley145 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Good that Abeer understood Shalini's pain. Both have joined hands to teach a lesson 2 Kuber. Mehbeer scenes are cute.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Mehbeer hug was so emotional. Loved meher consoling abeer.talk about bidai was so funny. Will kuber realize that meher is shalini?I feel he won't recognize her so fast
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Nice update
Abeer comforting meher when she was crying
N then meher trying to cheer abeer up when he went into his feeling guilty about past moment
Liked fact meher is worried about how abeer will feel helping her get revenge on his dad
Oh no he saw her tattoo I hope either her or abeer come up with a quick cover up b4 he suspects otherwise revenge idea out the window b4 she's even started
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Chp 16
Abeer's POV:
I went downstairs and went towards Meher.
I: kia hua dad?
I asked faking sweetness.
He: I was asking her about her tattoo, its just like Shalini's tattoo.
He said holding her wrist showing me her tattoo. I looked at Meher who wasn't comfortable with his touch. I made dad leave her hand and told him the meaning of that tattoo.
Me: this heart means she loves music, and these stars, one is for her mom, one for herself and one for little brother, her whole family is dead so she made it in their love. Aap bhi na dad, 2 logo ka tattoo same nh hosakta kya? (He turns to Meher) u go, mom is calling u.
She leaves from there.
I: Dad, what r u up to?
Dad: nothing.
He leaves for office. I went to kitchen and told Meher to hide her tattoo whenever she knows papa is around so that he doesn't asks about it again. She nodded and I went to my room and ate the food given by her, it was really tasty. I was sitting on my bed waiting for night to quickly come. Only I knew how much I have waited for the days we both can stay together all over again. I continued eating and went downstairs to keep back the plate, I again thought something wrong is happening. Then I saw Meher crying silently while working. I softly called her name keeping my hand on her shoulder. She just hmmed and continued with arranging the things.
I: I am thinking we should go to honeymoon tomorrow for 2 months.
I was damn serious, she looked at me pressing her lips hard and looked away. She started laughing palming her mouth.
I: kya hua?
She: 2 months? Do u know how u sounded? Aisa kya karna hai ?

I: haha, what about 1 week?
She: OK

She smiled at me and softly kissed my cheek.
Me: don't kiss in public, if u know what I mean.
She: OK
She replied coldly.
Me: and sleep early OK
She: hmm

I smilingly returned back to my room.
End of POV.

Meher's POV:
The things were already there on their original place, I was just pretending to work. But in reality I didn't wanted to go to our room. I have already went there many times, but why m I afraid right now? I will have to be strong, I m Meher not Shalini, and I am strong, I m not afraid. I went to our room slowly and saw Abeer isn't there so I quickly laid on the bed closing my eyes and drifted into the sea of my own thoughts.

Me: Maa don't worry I will be careful, trust me, unko sabaq sikha k rahungi, my life got ruined because of Abeer's dad right? And I was away from u all, I will teach him a lesson.
She: beta humne suna hai k Abeer ka baap Teri umar ki ladkion se chakkar chalata hai.
I got shocked listening to this.

Me: what?!
She showed me a video.

"Meher" Abeer's voice interrupted my thoughts.

Me: kia hua?
He: its first night of our marriage.
Me: so?
He: suhaagrat
I got up with a jerk.
Me: what?
He: why r u so scared?
Me: m not
I laid back. He closed the door of our room and switched off the lights and switched on the AC. He opened the curtains a little, only the moonlight came inside. He laid beside me pulling a blanket over us and moved a little closer to me keeping his arm round my waist. I kept my hand on his collar bone and he came more close coming on top of me, I shut my eyes close. He kissed my forehead then near my eyes then cheek, his finger stroked my earlobe a little making me shiver, he kissed near my lips understanding that I don't like lipkisses and all. Then he kissed my neck entwining his hands with mine, I slowly left his hand and my hand travelled to his back and I didn't knew when I slept.

Next day I woke up and saw him really close to me, I tried getting up but his grip was too tight, I saw the door open slightly. Someone was peeping inside our room, I laid back as if I m asleep but kept my eyes open to see who's it? The person kept coming closer to my side of bed and I got afraid and gripped Abeer's shirt shutting my eyes tightly.
Person: I will keep an affair with u also like I kept with other girls.

I heard the person say this and it was a male voice, I immediately recognized its Abeer's dad. He went away from there while I sweated badly as his words echoed in my ears.
End of POV

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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
Part-15,16 were Awesome.😊
Mehbeer Conversation was so Nice.😊
Abeer felt bad what he did with Meher/Salini,it was so sad.😭
Mehbeer convinced each other was so Nice.😊
In part-16,The way Abeer Convinced his father about Meher Tatoo was so Nice.😊
Mehbeer Pov were so Nice.😊
Mehbeer First Night part was so Cute.😳
The Feeling and Conversation of Mehbeer were so nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Part-15,16 were Awesome.😊
Mehbeer Conversation was so Nice.😊
Abeer felt bad what he did with Meher/Salini,it was so sad.😭
Mehbeer convinced each other was so Nice.😊
In part-16,The way Abeer Convinced his father about Meher Tatoo was so Nice.😊
Mehbeer Pov were so Nice.😊
Mehbeer First Night part was so Cute.😳
The Feeling and Conversation of Mehbeer were so nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu

Thnx, how's the last scene
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Abeer saved meher from his dad.that was a relief.mehbeer suhaag raat was sensual.shocking that kuber has affairs with young girls. Who is the present girl friend?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Nice update
Interesting
Thank god abeer made an excuse n took mehers hand from his father
Liked their wee romantic moment together with his teasing
Did I hear right abeers father is so disgusting he wants to have an affair with her
What does he mean like all the others though
Is that why he turned abeer against shalini he was planning to make a move on her
If so I can't wait for them to get revenge n I hope meher tells abeer what she heard
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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