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NONIE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Fantastic update Shreya😃

Edited by Nonie12345 - 9 years ago

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hey guys! This is just a small two paragraph random drabble! 😛 Do read and review!

Solace

She looked into the horizon. At the far end, where the Earth and Sky met. In that togetherness, there was separation. In the separation, there was still togetherness. The Sky, never ending, the Earth, vast, bearing all.

She smiled as the sun shone pleasantly on her face, as if agreeing with her. She loved watching what others would refer to as a drab, boring, desolate plain, where they met. But her solace was in the Sky and the Earth.

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sumi-19
Wow ! So beautiful, this is Shreya dear !!! 👏 ❤️
I love it !!!!!!
Keep writing dear !! 🤗
The line - Physically apart , mentally together is best line !! ⭐️

Thanks so much, Sumi! 🤗

I will, for sure, keep writing! 😳

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Beautiful!
True, a mother daughter bond is the strongest one
Not only a physical connection but Also a psychological one!
😳

So true, Mahi! I always find that even when my Ma is physically away, mentally, psychologically, emotionally, she is always by my side. 😳

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Anokhisharma
It's so beautiful shreya

U portrayed the bond shared by a mom nd her daughter in such a small para

Keep writing sweetie

Anokhii! 🤗

I will, for sure! Thank you for the review! 😳😳

Like I said, Ma is always by my side!

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: radianteyes.
This is beautiful shreya di
Encompassed the right feelings with a beautiful blend
Keep writing

Thanks, Char! 😳😳

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ramya06
This is lovely shreya! The mother-daughter bond is brought out in a beautiful way! Keep writing!

Ramyaa! 😳😳

Thanks so very much! I always find it the most beautiful bond! 😳😳

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -Nive-
Lovely piece of writing! I was wondering about the title being 'mother' until I read the second last line. Portrayed the beautiful in a subtle way 😊

Thanks! I did that on purpose, sort of 😛