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Hey all!
This thread will have all my random musings, thoughts, and drabbles, written as they come.
Please do read and review! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey! Part 1. Please read and review 😳

Mother

She closed her eyes. Things were getting beyond her control. She blinked back the unbidden tears, and hitched a smile onto her face. Walking out of the room, and into the living room, she sat, shyly, as a would-be bride, her gaze down.

No one knew, her heart and her soul belonged elsewhere. Her mind drifted to her mother. Physically apart. Mentally together. This time, her smile was genuine. She could have sworn she felt a hand squeezing hers comfortingly.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow ! So beautiful, this is Shreya dear !!! 👏 ❤️
I love it !!!!!!
Keep writing dear !! 🤗
The line - Physically apart , mentally together is best line !! ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful!
True, a mother daughter bond is the strongest one
Not only a physical connection but Also a psychological one!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's so beautiful shreya

U portrayed the bond shared by a mom nd her daughter in such a small para

Keep writing sweetie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is beautiful shreya di
Encompassed the right feelings with a beautiful blend
Keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is lovely shreya! The mother-daughter bond is brought out in a beautiful way! Keep writing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely piece of writing! I was wondering about the title being 'mother' until I read the second last line. Portrayed the beautiful in a subtle way 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was simply beautiful! Loved it to the core!

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