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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Tell me about it 😆
That's one of the reasons I write a lot. If I need a diversion from studying, I have my writing. That's why I seem to update a lot these days 😆😆 I hardly do anything other than these two 😛


Well I break my head on Logical Reasoning usually 😆.

And updates are on mood. 😆

If thoughts flow updates happen or else nthn 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
I am always doing Logical Reasoning side by side.
Thoughts always flow for me, apparently 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Shrutha, nice narration and great vocabulary. It is good that Dharani has faith in Krishna but the amount of faith she is putting on him is little worrying as for Krishna, she is not the only devotee as you have indicated that Dharani has no knowledge about her incarnation. So for a single human being, Krishna can't or not to spend his whole time. As you have indicated, she has to suffer the life as a normal human, so make her struggle to achieve. let her strive hard to reach her goal. And as you rightly made her mom spell, "God only helps to those who help themselves" So let her do her part promptly not by just praying him but by studying hard and let him show her just the path and not the final result. Let her earn the satisfaction of her hard work than relying on Lord for her success.

Yes, I understand about your faith in prayers but at the same time, it is you who have to find a way to come out of the mess you have created or landed into and Lord can only give you some peace of mind which helps you to think straight. even I do pray at times even before starting of a job or project and if I am prejudiced about its weight (enormity of work and dedication required), the I will pray by asking his blessings fro the end result and bless me to reach the goal and not to succumb midway. I ask for the strength to fulfill my job and let him decide the result as I feel if I have given my 100%, then whatever additional strength or support required to complete shall the blessed by god.

Yes it is good to pray and keep your faith in god at the start of your work but he should only be a guiding factor and the work has to be done by you. So praying shall be for mental strength to start the job and not the first step to succeed.

Sorry if even I am slightly differed from your ideology.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Dharani knows who she is. She knows she has to go through this human life for a reason. She will succeed. My point here is simple: Krishna expands Himself everywhere. Dharani is Bhudevi. Why wouldn't He be with her as well.
For her, praying is her parallel first step. As she prays, she immediately sits down to study, and work hard. To prove her parents wrong, to show them she is not useless.
This story is the journey of a Goddess, who takes the human form, and teaches people things through her life. I am writing this to show that Devotion in God and hard work and dedication can make your life very positive, irrespective of the past.
Strength is what I also ask from God. That is my drive. He is my drive. I have made Him the person who will motivate me to do my duty properly. That's all.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Hi Srutha, I never meant to hurt your feelings or not that I thought of criticizing your views. All I want to mention was, since you are writing on faith & hard work and as writing is a powerful media to convey and motivate people, just thought that it would have been better had you given more importance to hard work and convey that GOD will be with those who work hard to reach their goal. And I know every one has their own view and ideology about life and I respect your views.

Once again, I am really sorry if I have offended you with my words.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
I am not offended.
The hard work will come soon 😊 But I started writing this as a part love story also. It is all about all-rounded development of people's personality. It has a lot of psychology involved.
It is starting only now. The hard work part will come soon :) Never fear :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
@Shrutha what me, DD and Jaya are trying to tell is one thing. Use Krishna less, instead put incidences, people that show his presence. That will give more depth to your story and also the fact how he works behind the scenes helping the right people for the right cause.
Edited by shruthiravi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
@Shruthi- I will do what I can in that aspect 😊
See, the thing is, this story relies heavily on flashbacks, so in one way or the other, Krishna will end up coming in it. I will change that part of the story as much as I can, but there are some places where it will be unavoidable.
And also, this story involves the Krishna murti she has. For it is seeing that murti that she gets the resolve to do her duty.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
@Shrutha I am not telling you not to use it, but minimize it. Even if in front of murti when she closes the eyes, a favourable news coming, a friend coming can be used much better than talking to Krishna.
Edited by shruthiravi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

@Shrutha I am not telling you not to use it, but minimize it. Even if in front of murti when she closes the eyes, a favourable news coming, a friend coming can be used much better than talking to Krishna.

I have ideas for that. Never fear 😉

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