For The Earth Prologue 2- Chapter 1- 27/1/17 - Page 10

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

@Shrutha I am not telling you not to use it, but minimize it. Even if in front of murti when she closes the eyes, a favourable news coming, a friend coming can be used much better than talking to Krishna.

Originally posted by: Milaksh

Wow..nice work :-)

I loved the line "your love is my strength"😃👏

I feel this very line is the essence of the epics especially Ramayanam!!

It says it all..😉

Originally posted by: radianteyes.

Can I say I just read something about me

Perhaps I thought I am the one in the text

With a few things different

Originally posted by: LakshMila

👏
Speechless!

And not to forget the wide smile I got on my face when she chanted 'Krishna Krishna'
Such an engrossing read.
Please update very soon .

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Awh! Poor Dharani! Why doesn't people give her time to rectify her mistake!
She's also about one the luckiest persons on Earth! Swawam Kanha keeping a watch as she studies!

Originally posted by: KanhaKiChutki

Brilliantly framed. The visuals are strong. Of Pitambardhaari, with His morpankh.

*speechless*

Plus, the conceptualisation of a serious storyline, with Madhava is amazing.

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Amazing chapter Srutha😃

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

Beautiful update, Shru! I love it!

Btw, I am a little confused. Is Dharani a college student? And why is her mother being so mean? Does she love her or just being hard on her for no reason?