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ashlesha2

@ashlesha2

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hey another poem

Where n how do u manage all this

Anyways the poem was very emotional

But a shot cute one

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Wow it's so beautiful

you explain the emotions so well

that's the reality of life dear

You have amazing writing skill

keep writing like this if possible

love to read another unique piece of writing

thank you so much for pm

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Beautiful
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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tweetie19

@tweetie19

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

It was a heart touching, beautiful poem...It describes whatever I'm going through right now...u have penned it up so well...

Keep writing more of such lovely poems dear !!!

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

darling its an amazing one

Its true our heart is strange.Some times its made us think about

sooo wired

And darling what ever May be the circumstances pls don't think about end ur life

There is always a way to live a peaceful life

Life is so precious

Our peace is with in ourselves only

Try to write more

thanks for pm

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Beautifully penned poem dear 👏. So so expressive of ones pained heart.

Loved it and would like to read more poems from you 😃

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Niki.

@Niki.

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

ithna time tuje kaha se miltha hai..

I mean tu tho 12th main hain na...

tho zyaada pressure hogi from parents

fir ithna time kaha se😕😕

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

❤️ ❤️ 👏 👏 ❤️

Fantastic...

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Niki.

@Niki.

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

waise lagtha hain tere dil ki andar kuch dard hain

jo iss poem main bari huvi hain😲

don't have any reason to die

Neither do I to live,

bapre pressure of board exams kya

Everyday new dreams are born

And I live in that hope

Which way to go

I don't know.

I can't decide.

hmmm yeh tho har students ki soch hain

simple solution listen to ur heart ..

jo ki tu muje har bhaar kehti hain😳

Pressure is building up

And with that expectations too!

But all I need is a li'll support

Which is nowhere to be seen!

Hands are not held to help

omg lagtha hai parents tere saath nahi denge...I mean tere kuch aur sapne hain..aur tere parents ke kuch aur..

and they are not supportive 😲😲is that ur mess😲😲

My life has turned hollow

One of which I can't follow

The laziness,the dumbness

The weak and pale faces

Are common to see...but living a life equivalent to that of corpse...

Someone should ask me!

plz think positive coz there is god 😆 and don't take any extreme step..coz god always gives 2 options...think abt it😭

aur tere life is not equivalent to corpse🤢

zindingi khooburat hain

so smile at it😆

muskurathi rehna MD

Wish I could skip this phase and move on

The beginning would have made me fresh

Made me free of this nervous breakdown

Coz all I want is freedom

Which is nowhere to be seen!

Screams my hollow heart

hmm every student wants freedom to choose their own dreams their own route par aisa humesha nahi ho patha

nervous math ho...😲

konsa phase is it the present phase

hmmm🤔

Echoing all the misery it has hidden

And gradually develops this hysteria

That it's hard to tell if I'm laughing over my fate

Or is it the other way around?

Loneliness tickles me In the eye

And the strange silence follows

omg lonliness tickles u😲😲...areey frnds se share karle 😲😲 jo bhi dard hai share it

fir tu akeli nahi hogi

dost log honge tere saath

What is it like to die?

And to live?

Coz peace is achieved either ways

All I wanted was a li'll peace

Which is nowhere to be seen!

And to end everything

I can't console this

Strange hollow heart!

allah miya whts wrong with u ???

yeh sab kyon soching tu ??

you wanted peace aur peace is nowhere

do yoga simple😳

sari pareshani door hojayegi..

share ur pain with frnds lonliness bhi door hojayegi

Edited by nikii11 - 10 years ago

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Suganti Kularaju

@suganti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

wow..it was so beautiful.

love each and every line of it..

keep writing more dear.

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