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Posted: 10 years ago

love it...
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Preeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

Alright! This is some start. Runaway bride, road trip. Seriously, your story had me at road trip.

So this was a start, we are introduced to her brother, sister-in-law, and the protagonist.

Zara knew she was going to be married. So did she protest before? Was this one forced. Or she was confused- couldn't decide for herself and went with it. So our heroine ran away from altar, leaving everything behind, her family, husband-to-be. How are they going to react? Consequences? And does zara always acts on impulse or this time only out of desperation? And how this stranger going to react? Why would she trust him? How these two gonna hit it off? So many questions, one answer-next update ASAP!

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Preeti

P.S : okay, don't take me wrong, but If you need a beta reader, I volunteer!

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putti_taarey

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome start
Thoroughlyliked it
Zara,is a runaway bride
AAt last she managed to escape
Update aoom

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swati

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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry for late reply...
Bt your storyline is amazing...
Looking forward to it
n thnx for d pm

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Jasmine_ash

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Posted: 9 years ago

hi sana dear

how r u

lillian again back with new concept

wow really i was great

i could seee zarz fighting with her in thoughts

finally deciding to choose her path

each and every scene was beautifully described

thanks for pm

sorry like button not working do count my likes

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bluesky10

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Posted: 9 years ago

Fabulous dear

Really like it

Thanks for the pm dear

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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is amazing :)
I totally understand Zara's POV. Fantastic job 👏
Do update soon :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
This is amazing :)
I totally understand Zara's POV. Fantastic job 👏
Do update soon :)

thank u so much <3

i will try but as of now will u be able to check out my other story called : The Karma Cafe?

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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Elysian-

thank u so much <3
i will try but as of now will u be able to check out my other story called : The Karma Cafe?

Sure thing :)

It's also on WC right?

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