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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Awesome update..
Cant wait to read more..
Update soon..
Thanx for the pm..

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sneharjun92

@sneharjun92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

superb part. loved it.

zara agreed to marriage... bcz she never said no to her brother.

she did not want to get married. she ran away...

the man who came out is her groom... or...

waiting for next part..😊

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Riya

@Chocolate-Lover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Its an amazing chapter! I really like Zara's character! Can't wait to see how she and Joshua's relationship builds!

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

FANTASTIC PROLOGUE SANAYA.

LOVED IT.

U WROTE IT VERY BEAUTIFULLY THE THOUGHTS WHICH CAN COME TO GIRL WHO IS GOING TO MARRY.

LOVED THE POV OF ZARA.

ZARA REALLY I LOVED THE NAME SO BEAUTIFUL IT IS LIKE THE CHARACTER U PORTRAYED OF ZARA.

LOVED HER TALK WITH ANA.

SHE FLEW AWAY FROM HER MARRIAGE AWESOME.

JOSHUA THE CHARACTER SOUNDS VERY STRONG.

WANTS TO KNOW HOW THESE TOATALLY STRANGERS RELATIONSHIP DEVELOPS.

SO UPDATE ITS PART DEAR.

TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

wonderful start

soo good n interesting

lovely chapter

update soon n

pm me

take care

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

awsm beginning... loved d start... i m looking forward... plz update soon... keep writing. 😊

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Ashu

@Avalanche.

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Wonderful Update!!

I really like Zara's description of her situation 😆

Nice to see the mix of indian and latina. Meryl has gotta be hot 🤣

This is actually a life goal of mine. I seriously wanna run away from a wedding of mine. It kind of has a thrill.

The highway is seriously a dangerous place. I'm guessing the car she came in front of is Joshua's? 😉

I can't way to see them bicker. I always love these arguments 😆

Update soon milady!

Cheers, baby! <3

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Diya

@foreverlazy

Dazzler

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Yes, amazing start!

I like that you used the prologue to specifically describe Zara and her perspective on this whole marriage thing, and what was going through her head as she ran away.

And was that guys at the end Joshua?

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Lady you are so good at humor :P

Yeah I am talking about your Note -_-

Ana was hillarious with her thoughts and an irony *sigh*

I am do bloody glad Zara ran off. . .Mahn!She actually managed to did that. Can you imagine?

This was like a perfect Kick ass start ^_^

I want more so update pretty soon, I say :)

Chitra :)

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

WOW!! nice start dear...loved it

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