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YaSha0512

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice start

poor Zara so that's why she ran

she didn't want to marry the stranger her bro chose for her

n her SIL wasn't listening to her plea to stop the wedding

cant wait to see whats gonna happen now

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is a fantastic start , totally new and fresh

good one👏

i totally love it

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Uttara.D.Jaiswar

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice story.. :)
do continue soon.!
waiting..

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Areesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome start sanaya 😊
Love it

All the words you use and how you describe Zara's point of view was excactly a girl who's going to marry a stranger without her full heart would feel and think like that

Seriously I don't know why even our lady relatives be it our sister or sister in law say "he's good and rich, you should marry him" when they arrange our marriage without our permission...

Finally Zara leaving all behind ran from her own marriage

She almost got herself killed in the highway...

Who's that guy? Her Hero????

Thanks for pm sanaya 😊

Update soon
Waiting

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome start!

Poor Zara almost got married to a stranger

Glad she ran away...anyone would do that!

Who was the man at the end that shouted at her?

Eagerly waiting to read the next part...

Continue asap!! :)

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Titaliya1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice prologue! Lets c how the actual story goes!

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Jasmine_ash

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Posted: 10 years ago

beautiful start title looks interesting too

:)

hope to see more

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CrazyForAmar

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice start

It didn't had much as You just explained the basic track

So i can't say more

But i am really looking forward to this story

Continue ASAP

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rukuswasthika

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Posted: 10 years ago

superb start and it was cute yaar

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Meryl

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Posted: 10 years ago

Sanaya, I love the character you gave me in this story! It really means a lot.

And Zara is such a pretty name! LOL!

And this guy Josh, seems kinda jerky, but can't wait to read the buildup between the two!

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