A Wanderer ! [ Update -page 5] An Elegy To Myself ! - Page 2

its beautiful seetha... very well penned down and beautifully thought of...

Faith is my breath ...recollections in my smiling eyes !

writing the ignored chapters of past centuries ...with my dreams

on the floral gardens of love ... in the streaming rivers of life !

Yes ...I am a dreamy wanderer.. with a desire to feel the Nature's embrace...

Love is God. In fact God created us out of his love for us since all of us are a part of the whole. His unconditional and impartial love is sometimes misunderstood because when we suffer always this doubt comes in our mind, " why me" and then we start calling him partial . However we all know the pleasure and the pains that we experience in this life are the manifestations of our own karma.

Originally posted by: loveansh

Such a beautiful poem, full of enchanting pictures and colors, stars and silver moonlight...dreams and faith...and unbelievable magic with whom you weave your words into sentances that flow like a glimmering river in which a silver moon is mirrored...just like a true weaver that weave her dreams into the stories that we are not able to stop to read.

Seetha, my dear friend...beautiful dreamy wanderer..exceptional storyteller and softhearted poetess...such a beautiful poem you wrote...you deserve all the stars from the universe...

Every word that you wrote create a picture in my soul...I can see you wandering through your dreams...memories...through Nature that you love so much...I can feel your joy...your happiness...your curiosity, but above all, your love...your hope..your eternal goodness and longing to know more..to fly high...to dream big...I love every word you wrote...so grateful to met you on your traveling through this Universe of scattered dreams and eternal hopes,
never-ending love and beautiful friendships...

Branka, my sister!

Your write up is really intoxicating and makes me feel as a person from the moon! ...which I am not! It's so humbling! But I acknowledge your praise, deplete of all the superlatives, with humility! In fact, your write up stands out in comparison! Thanks for your encouragement.

Originally posted by: pari-kirloskar

its beautiful seetha... very well penned down and beautifully thought of...

especially the lines.

.I am a wanderer with a magic wand !

Faith is my breath ...recollections in my smiling eyes !

writing the ignored chapters of past centuries ...with my dreams

on the floral gardens of love ... in the streaming rivers of life !

Yes ...I am a dreamy wanderer.. with a desire to feel the Nature's embrace...

Thanks Pari-K ! I feel honoured with your words of appreciation. Such interactions and feed backs enable any one to get going...literally.. puts faith in the breath!

How true! Seetha, how I wish our children always to see only the brighter side of love. May they would not have to go thru the same pain which we experienced once. However I too realise, was not it our parents who wished the same for us 😊?

Originally posted by: Debbiee

How true! Seetha, how I wish our children always to see only the brighter side of love. May they would not have to go thru the same pain which we experienced once. However I too realise, was not it our parents who wished the same for us 😊?

Loe becomes mature only after a heart wrenching pain and that's what life is.

Yes Debbiee ! You summed up the apprehensions, wishes and prayers of all the mothers of the world... to see their off springs happy ! We try to show a safe path to tread to our children, but as they grow up, they will be the masters of their destiny...as you said , only experience gives maturity ! 😊

Unto Eternity

Since centuries ...a crusade to know the truth of the universe !

An attempt to paint a classic story with the rain droplets ...

On the wide expanse of the oceans' blue canvas ...

An effort to describe the True story with the lightning suspense !

And there ... the tidal wave ...to describe the unmindful feelings

Of some of the forgotten civilizations of the ancient history

The Sun and the Moon are the thoughtful eyes of the time...

Coloring the dreams with the imaginary green fields ,

On the heart of the rotating earth ...glowing under the revolving Moon

Studded the stars as the embellishments of the love ,

Under the wraps of the seasons ...on the wings of the sufferings!

Whenever I started to write the prologue...there was an interlude ,

A never ending preface ...yet to start the main story

Time is questioning the whereabouts of the space ...

With a smiling face ...space has shown time ---

The way to eternity ...the path of the infinity !!