A Wanderer ! [ Update -page 5] An Elegy To Myself !

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A Wanderer !

I am a wanderer with a kindling heart and a wavering mind ...

Always wanted to know the depths of the sea and the width of the sky ...

Be the fish in the deep sea and a colourful kite in the clouds..

Wish to run into the stem of a flower and the soul of a fantasy !

A strong desire in my mind ... to go nearer the moon ...and

Weave a moonlight veil ...and wear it on my soul...

Stud it with starry dreams ...and silken desires ...

Unroll the galaxy and walk on the carpet cushion !

Yes...I want to pacify the volcanoes ... and quell their fumes

Warm up the ice lands..and cheer up their frozen hearts !

Be the rain from heavens to quench the thirst of parched fields

Swim the oceans of knowledge and scale the peaks of imagination !

Who am I?---what I want to be? ...just a story teller... a nature's narrator ..

An explorer of baffling themes ..A wanderer with time ..a traveller with wind ...

Traversing into the time-warp...fading into the obscure oblivion..

Into the lap of recycling Nature ..A foregone conclusion of life !

But...I am a wanderer with a magic wand !

Faith is my breath ...recollections in my smiling eyes !

writing the ignored chapters of past centuries ...with my dreams

on the floral gardens of love ... in the streaming rivers of life !

Yes ...I am a dreamy wanderer.. with a desire to feel the Nature's embrace...

See the fragrant breeze...taste the aura of triumph...hold the

Crimson moon..hovering with the clouds... riding on the eluding mirages ...

Chasing my own shadows !... and to fill the ecstasy into everyone's life !!

----seetha

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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊...
Nice poem SEETHA ...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Seetha I went into trance on reciting the last verse of the poem. Engulfed in melancholic feelings really want to identify myself not with this superficial name but want to dwell deep inside me, to know who am I, what are the motives behind my being. Really want to ponder on such thoughts and your poem has the depth and the tranquility which can be helpful in meditating and if possible attain the communion with the existence.
Well crafted poem 👏Seetha the poetess😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ Hemangi ...It is so gratifying to know that it stirred your soul...if it really did, I consider myself a lucky one...

to have someone like you, acknowledging and appreciating a genuine attempt to express myself!

Thank you so much!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _M-A-N-U_

😊...

Nice poem SEETHA ...👏

Thank you Manu !
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Light tells darkness that I am here,
Victory tells defeat that I am here,
I wish I can change the fate of yesterday,
I Use the brickbats as the stepping stones and grow,
I think of those who chase me as well wishers and move forward,
I use tears to cultivate the burning fire in to lamp holder and spread the light,
You always Encouraged with heart,directed with love,your eyes always looking to protect your children from evil !
I am happy you are there ! My dear friend!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have already conveyed my appreciation to this poem of yours but will do it again as it so deserves it👏. Touching, sensitive, replete with heart wrenching imagery, soothing, a siege on the senses, love your poem!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibraj

I have already conveyed my appreciation to this poem of yours but will do it again as it so deserves it👏. Touching, sensitive, replete with heart wrenching imagery, soothing, a siege on the senses, love your poem!

Very gratifying ...thank you Vibha !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Technicalities apart ...i just want to express my inner feelings in free flowing verses !

The Surreal Love . [The shades of love ]

The paradox in life is ...one can't live happily with love ...

And ironically can't live without it too !

Look within and you will find it in yourself--

Which often brings a smile on your face !!

But most of the times it crushes you under its burden...

Unbearable even for a rocky mountain !

In totality love is life and love is pain ... but always with us ...

In every breath of us ...in every moment ...till the end !----

At times the beginning of life and at times the end in itself !!

We sometimes buy flowers and bouquets to decorate and express it,

And sometimes we may have to make a wreath for our own funeral and

Walk alongside the mourning procession!

Love is surreal.. no one knows when it would strike...

And send you to the seventh heaven---

And when it knocks you down and hurls you into the abyssal depths!

Sending you scurrying in search of the meaning of life!

Nascent love is effervescent.. grown up love gives you glowing dreams

Heart-breaks smother the soul and batter the mind !

Desperate situations search for leads of love and grab as they come!

Mature love makes it stable and lasts till eternity!!

Edited by SEETHA.K - 11 years ago
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😊...
Nice poem SEETHA

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