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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Hey thats my ball," I screamed in my loudest pitch .
ohk... okay he said looking at me with an expression I couldn't understand.
"Hi I am Kartik and u are Mrs...?"
My face became crimson . I wanted to shout " I am not married ...U idiot. Do I look so old?"
but of course i manged to somehow control my outburst .
" I am Pari and i am not...".
"Yeah I know u arent married" and before I knew he had gone. I am not sure if I heard a chuckle as if he was enjoying himself seeing me go red.
Anyways with my ball and racket along with Samantha, I went back home.
OH... well let me introduce myself...
I am Pari Chavan , 23 years old,a petite primary teacher.
It was a sunday and a holiday so thought to play tennis and when I went there .. to my suprise again I saw him playing there. Of course being a coward , instead of playing, I turned and was about to go back home when I heard a familiar voice "Mrs. ...Pari...HEYA.."
I turned back and was about to give him some peace of mind, when he suddenly muttered...
"I am sorry Pari. Its just that I love the blush in your face when u get all angry and shy."
I know I should have punched him but somehow his words sounded sincere so I let it go...

I dont know why.. but I dreamt about him after going him. it sounds silly but sometimes there is no explanation.
My friend Samantha started having a crush on him. we both had met him at the same time in tennis court.
she wanted me to keep a close tab on him and become his best friend so that I can help her to get him. well I found this idea totally insane but for my friend I agreed to do it.

After two months I and kartik became good friends. He used to talk to samantha too but his eyes were always on me.
One day all three of us went for a movie. Of course it was his plan to take me only but I insisted unless samantha also comes I wont go anywhere.
That day after the movie he proposed me in front of samantha. I was shocked, astonished and perhaps a bit happy(may be even i has unwillingly fallen for him).
I was dumbstruck and didn't know what to say. When i averted my gaze toward samantha, she looked at me with such venom that tears started falling from my eyes. I know she misunderstood me. she thought on the pretext of helping her I manged to make her love mine.
She stomped and left me there with him. He of course couldn't understand whats going on..
but I politely but firmly told him that we can never be together. "samantha likes you and if u really love me then please ask her out."
"are u mad? When i love u, why should i go out with her", he bellowed .
"IF U LOVE ME, PLease LEAVE ME FOREVER" and with that I left him with tears and went away forever from them, Infact left the country too for three years and when I returned back .. 6 months before..
I heard thegood news from a mutual friend that kartik and Samantha are happily married with their first child and have named her PARI...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey i just loveD the whole story
it was really very beautiful loved it

it literally touched my heart :)

and then from a novel this line bumpeD into my head after reading your OS

Ishq insan ko duniya k dusry hissay my ly jata Zameen per rehny nhi deta or Ishq e La Hasil...
Log kehty hain insan ishq e majazi ( when u love some person) say ishq e haqeeqi (love of the Lord himself) tk tab safar krta hai jab ishq la hasil rehta hy.
Jb insan jholi bhar bhar k muhabbat kray or khali or khali hath ly kr phiray"
and there's another quote from another novel
"la hasil (jo mil nhi ska kabi) hamesha pur kashish rehta hy"

and love it never dies we just learn to burry our feelingx and we keep on trying to find out ways to keep them in our head heart n sight :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's really interesting waiting to read more continue soon plz and pm me (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey pari its really awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i want to thank all of u for liking and appreciating my story..a big hug.. to u all...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari-kirloskar

i want to thank all of u for liking and appreciating my story..a big hug.. to u all...🤗


aww you desrved our appreciation
Stay Blessed
Keep writing more
:)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of all thanks for the pm!!!
I wouldn't have known about it or else...
this ahhmaazziinggg
loved the concept!!! Something very nice and beautiful!!!
sacrifice...another love... Loved the name and the story!!!!
its ahmazing... The way u wrote its simple!!!
the way they met!!! Sooo cute!!!
his compliment to her abt her shy crimson red cheeks!!!
loved it!!!! Chhhooo cute!!!!
and den finally the proposal...
this had to happen...!!! But pari she sacrificed her love for her friend... She could have accepted it but she didnt...
loved it about her!!! Clearly shows people in love have to sacrifice at some point...
some at earlier stages and some at later...
karthik for his love's happiness married Samantha...
shows he truly loved her!!!
awesome story!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arsha_simran

first of all thanks for the pm!!!

I wouldn't have known about it or else...
this ahhmaazziinggg
loved the concept!!! Something very nice and beautiful!!!
sacrifice...another love... Loved the name and the story!!!!
its ahmazing... The way u wrote its simple!!!
the way they met!!! Sooo cute!!!
his compliment to her abt her shy crimson red cheeks!!!
loved it!!!! Chhhooo cute!!!!
and den finally the proposal...
this had to happen...!!! But pari she sacrificed her love for her friend... She could have accepted it but she didnt...
loved it about her!!! Clearly shows people in love have to sacrifice at some point...
some at earlier stages and some at later...
karthik for his love's happiness married Samantha...
shows he truly loved her!!!
awesome story!!!!


thank you...😳 am glad u appreciated it...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow it was amazing love it
but i dun like its ending
i know its on sacrifice but
still
i want to ask sumthing
was this a real story????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: navk

wow it was amazing love it
but i dun like its ending
i know its on sacrifice but
still
i want to ask sumthing
was this a real story????


thank u..😛
no.. it wasnt a real story.!!
just creativity of my silly mind..😳

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