Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: Roxxy47
To be Honest , i don't have the 'Perfect' words to describe how this poem of your's actually is...
Seriously!! I'm Speechless 👏...

The lady just wanted to help the man she loves , go through his pain , for that she presented herself N what she got in return was his wrath , haterd ...

This really was Fabulous ...
Again awesome choice of words 👍🏼...
Loved it ❤️.

toh...comment aur bhi long kar do😛
she represented herself in the attire of his 1st wife...so he dislikes it.

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: sashashyam
It is perceptive, and in places, in the Lady's parts, it sounds Shakespearan. As for the husband's reaction, that is a man all over! He will never admit that he might be wrong, after all.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

yeah...just a try😳...try to follow Guruji

obviously...never...it's in man's blood

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

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4 pming me...😊

4 late comment as always...😕

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