Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile - Page 76

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it dear, thank you.โค๏ธ
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Posted: 12 years ago



frnd...๐Ÿ˜›

4 comment sooo late......
ur update was
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u done a
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lots of 4 u.๐Ÿค—..



the job up dear..๐Ÿ‘..





keep ing dear...๐Ÿ˜ƒ




dear...๐Ÿ˜ณ
lov,โค๏ธ
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...๐Ÿ˜ก
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...๐Ÿ˜•

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...๐Ÿ˜ญme uncontorled sob.sob..๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really loved them all. ๐Ÿ‘
Thanks for the pm๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: surprising

Related 2 poems-

A Rainy Desert - PAGE 18 84152721


Ever Lasting Adieu- PAGE 96 85372325


Recap:

She fell in love with him at first sight...he is 18-20 years older than her...in a helter-skelter condition their marriage took place...he was growing feelings for her...one night he was in great pain with the remembrance of his first wife.She wanted to soothe him...so presented herself just like his first wife...he accepted her for that night...in the morning, when he could realize all these...was in vicious wrath with her...at heart,he too has already fallen for her,but don't want to welcome the feeling now...


Love-making Hatred


Person:

Dreamland is a rubbish thing
That always shows colourful glass as a diamond...
Yes, you should have a strong ambition to fulfill your desire
That will be the aggressive step towards your aim-
But dream??...has no real entity at all.
A man gets complete with his mistakes & experience as well-
Not by the fake imaginary dreamland he creates himself
& loves to get lost in it.

I DON'T LOVE YOU-that's final.

There's no existence of your love for me.


Lady:

You are wrathful my lord,

You are losing power of thought,to connect the reason & result..

You need rest...you should take time...

Don't put pressure on your heart darling-

It never tells you the lie''that you want to hear.

You can't face the truth that you love me'.

I can understand but...you?? not yet.

Person:

Memories or a bunch of excuses

To escape from the real life??
Problems are such thorns of lotus
Which you should have to touch before the petals.

Lady:

Memory pains you a lot-I know,but this time...

This time you should bear it,for your ultimate good.

I'm Helen--I was me,I'm me,I'll be me.

You have to accept me as your love-I'm demanding.


Person:


Mistakes can achieve pardons

Not THE SIN...& repeating mistake is called so.
One having so many future views about the dreadful result
Should have been smashed for his knowingly sin.
There is nothing left to apologize-
Neither to want nor to give.

You have committed the SIN...I NEVER FORGIVE YOU.

NEVER MEANS NEVER.




Simply Adorable...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for wonderful poems, well done dear keep it coming.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its quite nice
Enjoyed reading the stuff!
Keep it up :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
damn all of ur poems are sooo damn beautiful
ufff...amazing
i must say u r tooo gud ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...where do u get the inspiration...awwwsssuuummm!!!
No words to describe...!!! Midas touch...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago





...๐Ÿ˜›howz u???

4 PMing me...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
u r done ...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
4 ur awessome work...
me just ...๐Ÿ˜›
lots of ...
dear...๐Ÿ˜ณ
lov,โค๏ธ
Tama



NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...๐Ÿ˜ก
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜•
Note:

guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...๐Ÿ˜•

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...๐Ÿ˜ญme uncontorled sob.sob..๐Ÿ˜ญ
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics


NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..





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Posted: 12 years ago
Hats Off to each and every Piece of work of yours..๐Ÿ‘
I am fortunate enough to read it..๐Ÿ˜ณ

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