Correction- A Kittya_Cullen Piece - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Grace-

brilliantly written! by using just the right amount of vocabulary and the finest details and descriptions you made this piece worth it!

That was a brilliant piece:):):)cant believe the girl's mother accused her own child:):):)but sad such people exist:(:(you emoted the girl really beautifully:):):)

Wonderfully written. The sweet innocence described wonderfully. The attack at the creek and the home deserved more than the stinging slap. Glad she had someone on her side.

Originally posted by: subi27

That was a brilliant piece:):):)cant believe the girl's mother accused her own child:):):)but sad such people exist:(:(you emoted the girl really beautifully:):):)

thanks for sharing this wonderful update with us...the story is so sad but good atleast in the end someone acknowlede tht it wasnt her fault...btw i loved the anology of the mangoes flies and the girl's life...correct me if i m wrong i think sucking those mangoes represents girl;s desire to live a healthy life a dream of bright and prosperous life and the flies represents the reality of it how her life was crushed and sucked like the fly.donno wat i m blabbering 😆 but thts the effect of your OS on me...i could very well connect to the state of her mother and father as well...oh poor child she never dreamt she would go through so much trauma she has almost forgotten her pain infact she is dwelling in her own thought where did she went wrong wat was her fault and the last line was awesome... thanks for the brilliant write up👏

Amazing...u hv described all the emotions wonderfully

Originally posted by: dqno1

Wonderfully written. The sweet innocence described wonderfully. The attack at the creek and the home deserved more than the stinging slap. Glad she had someone on her side.

Well done.

Thank you, Avi! There's no excuse for her mother's initial reaction, and yet I couldn't help but think about the different meanings that can exist when those words are uttered by different people for the same situation. So based on my thoughts regarding her mother, I'm not quite sure what exactly would be needed, but if she does have a heart at all, then I think seeing the aftermaths of the events on her child will be more adept punishment than that slap. Like you, I'm glad that the little girl had someone with her. Not everyone does.

Originally posted by: _IcePrincess_

That was beautifully written, I loved it!👏
A really touching piece of work!

I appreciate the response😳

Originally posted by: sanjh11

thanks for sharing this wonderful update with us...the story is so sad but good atleast in the end someone acknowlede tht it wasnt her fault...btw i loved the anology of the mangoes flies and the girl's life...correct me if i m wrong i think sucking those mangoes represents girl;s desire to live a healthy life a dream of bright and prosperous life and the flies represents the reality of it how her life was crushed and sucked like the fly.donno wat i m blabbering 😆 but thts the effect of your OS on me...i could very well connect to the state of her mother and father as well...oh poor child she never dreamt she would go through so much trauma she has almost forgotten her pain infact she is dwelling in her own thought where did she went wrong wat was her fault and the last line was awesome... thanks for the brilliant write up👏

Lol! I wouldn't say that I was thinking along those particular lines when I wrote the story, but your interpretation does cover what the entire story represents:- the presence of innocence and a simple, untouched life being ripped apart by a moment of unexpected and unknown violence. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts with me.