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Posted: 12 years ago
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The Fall

I am falling...

Falling high from the sky,

Having a grand fall from heaven,

The way Lucifer felled once.

I am falling...

In the never ending depression

Of liquid sulfur,

The way Satan felled once.

I am falling...

My hands, my legs,

My pride, my curves,

My elegance...

Leaving me

Tearing my flesh and blood,

Exposing my ugly bones

I am falling...

The warm bubbles of Sulfur are jumping

Assuring me, they will calm me

Inviting me into their chest

I am closing my eyes, oh how can I?

My eye balls are floating in the

Universe, finding eternity...

I am falling...

With nothing but my 7 pounds heart

The only thing left with me,

Letting the burning sulfur to claim my soul.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg preeto wt a poem👏

hayeee tu inni talented kese hei😭meko bhi bana de😳

mere talent ka khazana🤗

love u n loved ur poem👏

its just mindblowing awesumm supa fab ⭐️

hv to say u r a god gifted gal yr😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum poem priety...👏...
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Originally posted by: ashishi

omg preeto wt a poem👏 Thank you

hayeee tu inni talented kese hei😭meko bhi bana de😳
mere talent ka khazana🤗
all are my real feelings, nothing related to talent 😉


love u n loved ur poem👏 I am happy 😊

its just mindblowing awesumm supa fab ⭐️ zyaada ho raha hain 😛

hv to say u r a god gifted gal yr😳 You are a God gifted girl, I never seen a inno like you...love u loads 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rabzonedge

awesum poem priety...👏...

Thanks Tammy 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing sueperb awesome...👏👏👏...u r really brilliant preity...the poem was amazing ...👍🏼...love it...❤️...u r great preity...u r really talented...⭐️⭐️...superb yaar..⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Preity girl its awesome. 👏

You are an amazing writer, I mean you really have a gift and you should surely explore this side of urs. Just awesome ⭐️

Love u girl and I am lucky to know such a talented girl. ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow thats a nice one preeto 😊
short but those lines say it all.
but one thing i couldn't agree with you is that pride, intelligence, eligance, honesty.. these are all abstract things unlike our mortal body, they can never leave us.
but otherwise its awsome!!😛
keep it up!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing poem Preity ⭐️⭐️.. Khub sundor.. Really loved it a lot ❤️.. Keep writing more.. 🤗 ❤️

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