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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: nanditam2107
Wow!!! Nice man!!! What a terrific poem it was!!!
It contained so many emotions!!!!😊

Short, sweet & crispy!!!!

You are seriously one of those girls full of talent!!!! Well done!!!!!😃👏

He he Nandita, meri itni bhi tarref mat karo... 😉😆

Thanks... I am happy u understood the sweetness of the melancholic poem
Thanks for considering my writing crispy
And yep, I don't like writing more long poem, this is long enough for me 😛
And about the emotions yes they were my own feelings for that day

Keep reading
stay blessed

love,
Preity 😳

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Nandita

@Nandita217

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Keep writing gal!!!!😃👍🏼

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Aisha_k

@Aisha_k

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Preity you are really talented one ... The poem is really great amazing ..you are really different and mature writer::: love you 👍🏼

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: DantaDeepa
lovely upd dear

This is not a update, this is a poem

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Radev_virman
Preity you are really talented one ... The poem is really great amazing ..you are really different and mature writer::: love you 👍🏼

OMG aishu ne itna taarif ki meko hawww... thanks aishu love u 😳
abb wo stories pe bhi unres kar

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Menzena
WOW!! You wrote this??

It is amazing, it seems so nice. I REALLY LOVE IT !!

I wonder what inspired you to write this? 🤔😉

"The way lucifer fell once ..." this has such deep meaning, you have the mind of a poet

I love the whole poem, your really talented!! ❤️ 👍🏼

Yes dear ... I, me only myself wrote this 😆
I was little depressed that day, so the feelings came naturally 😉
Thank you very much for loving this 😳

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: alicemath
Awsum work...
Writing down a poem z far more difficult thn a story...n u handle both very well...U truly r an amazingly talened writer...👏👏
It wz a pleasure reading ur work...plzz do cum up wid more...
Thnx fr the pm!!!

But you know Divya, my Alice😳 I think writing a poem is so easy, just to write what you feels, but for story imaginative characters and all 😉😆
Its my pleasure to read your comments... you are one of the best commenter, who encourages me a lot

Thank you 😳