The Moving Train... - Page 2

Originally posted by: TheBrat

The narrator is hopelessly optimistic and lazy enough to take that one step forward😆
Glad to have you here girl.🤗 I remember you from my other story's thread.

lazy 🤣 not lazy, courageous 😳😆
u write beautifully 🤗

This is so awesomely written! I love night journeys...especially the part where everyone sleeps and you are the only one who is awake. You go near the gate to see which stop it is and even the station at mid-night is almost empty...except for few lights here and there. I'm not very fond of lights...you know! I could imagine someone dangerously leaning outside! Look at me... I'm a scared soul who would think 10 times before doing that.

Originally posted by: Purple_Lady

the start.. u know where u described nights .. its exactly what i feel standing in my bedroom window almost every night...

and the way u shaped it up with .. the train journey.. clearly strikes u.. !

god.. u had me hold my breath till the last sentence.. hope shall never die!

I love silent nights and I love staring at them for hours... though that sounds scary😆
Thank you for the review girl :)
And yes, hope shall never die.

Originally posted by: Clever.Foxxy

lazy 🤣 not lazy, courageous 😳😆
u write beautifully 🤗

@Bold: Says the one who's the winner of a certain contest in TMLS? Oh yeah I read that and quite frankly mesmerized.

Originally posted by: -Crayon-

This is so awesomely written! I love night journeys...especially the part where everyone sleeps and you are the only one who is awake. You go near the gate to see which stop it is and even the station at mid-night is almost empty...except for few lights here and there. I'm not very fond of lights...you know! I could imagine someone dangerously leaning outside! Look at me... I'm a scared soul who would think 10 times before doing that.

Not to forget the loony people that would peer at you when the train stops at the stations. You know I got middle berth and our window was open so I was staring outside and there was this monkey cap chap who stopped at my window and stared back squarely at me which made me shut the window next moment of course. Eeks loony people all over😆

I love middle berths! Even the chai walas in the train excite me!

I still remember waiting for seven hours for a train and made a girl one of my best friends in this time, roaming the whole station like maniacs and shooting stupid videos interviewing each other and finally observing that everyone in the platform are staring at us like if we are loonies. And that happened just two months back. Now say who's loony? 🤣
That Chai incident is sooo adorable. Man I can as well imagine a curly haired child yelling her lungs out asking to buy chai. Aww <3

Hey man! At least you did something productive and exciting! I never ...never ever did anything during these waiting sessions except for cursing the people responsible for the delay even though I didn't know them! I turn into morcha mode...like I would grow and change the entire thing! 'Yes I can' mode!

Rofl. That's pretty obvious. We all are curly haired morons aren't we? Lifts hands in air and shouts "Ho Ho"🤣
You atleast knew "Chai" I swear I didn't know anything remotely Hindi except the word "Hindi" of course🤣