The Moving Train...

^Rofl Avi, I didn't as much go closer the door let alone put a feet out. True indeed some burdens are meant to be our own special secrets that surround us wherever we go. Frankly speaking this is something I wrote and posted through mobile since I was bored to death and can't sleep. Haven't really expected a response. Thanks for being here though 🤗

very nice the narrator chose to face her problems one more time 👍🏼

Originally posted by: hkl75

i love piece of writing which truly gives off feeling n surrounding together without letting go the real theme.

U wrote it so nicely, i felt as if i m the one standing in the door of moving train...

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Nothing could be more rewarding than knowing that my piece of writing made you experience the feel :)
Thank you so much!!

Originally posted by: Clever.Foxxy

very nice the narrator chose to face her problems one more time 👍🏼

The narrator is hopelessly optimistic and lazy enough to take that one step forward😆
Glad to have you here girl.🤗 I remember you from my other story's thread.

A moving tale, quite relatable in an odd way. I don't know what made you write but sometimes it does get difficult it and all you want to do is take that step forward...and yeah be done with it. Having said that I liked how you ended this on a hopeful note. Yup, maybe we can give it another chance and hope it works.

Originally posted by: Ameres

A moving tale, quite relatable in an odd way. I don't know what made you write but sometimes it does get difficult it and all you want to do is take that step forward...and yeah be done with it. Having said that I liked how you ended this on a hopeful note. Yup, maybe we can give it another chance and hope it works.

Your writing is touching and intelligent. Keep writing more! :))

Human mind works in wondrous ways. They say that everything is in our brain isn't it? She was the one who want to take that step and it here but she was the one who wants to take a chance :)
Glad to have you here and oh I wrote it because I was sleep deprived and wanted to time pass😆
I was writing from quite sometime over a couple but since few days I was concentrating on writing varied stuff so hopefully you could find more of me here or at my blog

the start.. u know where u described nights .. its exactly what i feel standing in my bedroom window almost every night...