Eyes And Vision [Original SS] : Chapter 10 : Pg 53 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
ahan...nice update bt ya da cliffhanger thng ws...😆
dnt do it again...m loving her more n more everyday...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice but is not its too short for an update...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well, Mahi, you certainly know the ways of suspense. In fact, it makes the readers extremely anxious to know what happens next. This way, they immediately wish to read the fan fiction as soon as possible. So wonderful job.

The narrators thoughts are expressed wonderfully. Although some of his emotions for the gal is sympathy, he likes her personality, regardless on her lack of eyesight. The conversation between the two are well written, even though it's harder for me to comprehend (since it's meant to be in Hindi.) But no worries, I get better at the language.

Anyways, eagerly waiting for your next update. Take care.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Okk... Now regarding this part...
Firstly... I have to give this compliment... Very Fast updates...!!!! Its a challenge... Make me give this compliment for AM.. *Meri sui wahin pe atki hai By God...*
N nice part... Lets c aage kya hota hai...
Although I wanna know the Arth mystery...!
But wrong time pe end kiya,...!!!!
Itna curiosity aur suspense chal raha tha n den end...!

N thanx for the pm... Thank u Aashi...!!!

Pooja





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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updt mahak
waiting to know arth mystery ...cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
interesting concept! :) n the way you write it is so beautiful.
he met a blind girl, n he didn't realize it at first. we just dont have to sympathize with a person because they're blind. the same way we don't have to just shout at a person who made a small mistake.
she knew that he was in some problem..and he felt so good that someone knew and someone cared!
his name reminded her of something..aww, i hope its not too bad.
she took him to his house..which was so small and she lived there alone! wow. is she married? i want to know too..i hope she isn't!
thanks for the pm
will wait for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow

Part 3 was awesum

Loved it

Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Awesome update

Loved it loadz
Cant wait 4 da next part
Con soon
thanks 4 da PM
Muahhh
Xxx
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I am happy that you find it awesome :)

Thanks for loving it :)

And I am thankful to you for leaving a review... :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Wow

Part 3 was awesum

Loved it

Cont soon







I am happy that you find it awesome :)

Thanks for loving it :)

And I am thankful to you for leaving a review... :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gopi06

nice updt mahak
waiting to know arth mystery ...cont soon
thanks for the pm







I am happy that you find it nice :)

Arth mystery? Oh Gosh! There is nothing that serious...i am so sorry if i gave any wrong ideas!

Thanks for loving it :)

And I am thankful to you for leaving a review... :)

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