Eyes And Vision [Original SS] : Chapter 10 : Pg 53

umaima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

ahan...nice update bt ya da cliffhanger thng ws...😆

dnt do it again...m loving her more n more everyday...😃

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valliyah

@valliyah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Nice but is not its too short for an update...!!!

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Nikki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Well, Mahi, you certainly know the ways of suspense. In fact, it makes the readers extremely anxious to know what happens next. This way, they immediately wish to read the fan fiction as soon as possible. So wonderful job.

The narrators thoughts are expressed wonderfully. Although some of his emotions for the gal is sympathy, he likes her personality, regardless on her lack of eyesight. The conversation between the two are well written, even though it's harder for me to comprehend (since it's meant to be in Hindi.) But no worries, I get better at the language.

Anyways, eagerly waiting for your next update. Take care.

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ShwePoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: ...Mahak...

Okk... Now regarding this part...

Firstly... I have to give this compliment... Very Fast updates...!!!! Its a challenge... Make me give this compliment for AM.. *Meri sui wahin pe atki hai By God...*

N nice part... Lets c aage kya hota hai...

Although I wanna know the Arth mystery...!

But wrong time pe end kiya,...!!!!

Itna curiosity aur suspense chal raha tha n den end...!

N thanx for the pm... Thank u Aashi...!!!

Pooja

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bhargavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

nice updt mahak
waiting to know arth mystery ...cont soon
thanks for the pm

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aishwarya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

interesting concept! :) n the way you write it is so beautiful.

he met a blind girl, n he didn't realize it at first. we just dont have to sympathize with a person because they're blind. the same way we don't have to just shout at a person who made a small mistake.

she knew that he was in some problem..and he felt so good that someone knew and someone cared!

his name reminded her of something..aww, i hope its not too bad.

she took him to his house..which was so small and she lived there alone! wow. is she married? i want to know too..i hope she isn't!

thanks for the pm

will wait for the update

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sariska sujaini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Wow

Part 3 was awesum

Loved it

Cont soon

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
Awesome update
Loved it loadz
Cant wait 4 da next part
Con soon
thanks 4 da PM
Muahhh
Xxx
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I am happy that you find it awesome :)

Thanks for loving it :)

And I am thankful to you for leaving a review... :)

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Mahak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti
Wow

Part 3 was awesum

Loved it

Cont soon

I am happy that you find it awesome :)

Thanks for loving it :)

And I am thankful to you for leaving a review... :)

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: gopi06
nice updt mahak
waiting to know arth mystery ...cont soon
thanks for the pm

I am happy that you find it nice :)

Arth mystery? Oh Gosh! There is nothing that serious...i am so sorry if i gave any wrong ideas!

Thanks for loving it :)

And I am thankful to you for leaving a review... :)

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