Eyes And Vision [Original SS] : Chapter 10 : Pg 53 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ecstasy-

Choice of names is very interesting, Arth n Pankhudi, meaningful and enchanting. Both the names compliment each other, lovely!

About the update.. upto the mark and to our expectations. Eloquent.

Sans vision, Pankhudi is still so visual and has an articulate view of situations. Arth has comparatively less solved-mind unlike Pankhudi.. right? Her serene nature ornaments her way of living life.

I love both o' ya characters..







I am glad that you like the names :)

I chose them for a particular reason...achanak se click kar gaye the :)

Yeah...both names do compliment each other...thanks... <3

Thank you..i am ecstatic that the update was met with your expectations :)

You are absolutely right in your observations...her serenity is the basis of this SS.

even i do...if i may say so myself :)

And thanks for leaving a review...i really wait for them :)
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Posted: 14 years ago



"Lagta hai ki aapko thand lag rahi hai...aap aisa kyun nahi karti hai ki aap us shade ke neeche baith jaayein? Humein maaf kar dijiyega. Humne aapke baare mein socha hi nahi. Bas itni thand mein aapko bhi apne saath bitha liya."


She smiled gently at me. I felt as if it was a painful smile. There was surely more to the surface.


"Nahi...hum aise hi theek hain...vaise bhi...humein yeh baarish bahut pasand hai. Arth Ji, aapko pata hai kya? Jab hum dekh sakte the, tab hum baarish mein ghanton bheegte the...baarish ki boondon ko pakadne ki koshish karte the. Aap humari chinta mat kijiye...hum theek hain. Haan, agar aapko thand lag rahi hai,toh hum dono saamne waali chat ke neeche jaa sakte hain."


I knew it. She wasn't blind since her birth. She had a heavenly smile on her face when she described the rain. I wish I could share the same view. How could she see everything in a different light? Is she for real?


I knew that even if she says so, she must be feeling cold. And she clearly, won't go if she feels that I am concerned about her. And truly, the rain in the last thing in my mind right now.


"Hmm...humein thand lag rahi hai. Toh, Pankhudi, aap chalengi shade ke neeche?"


"Haan,...chaliye."


We reached there and I lit up the fire place. The shade wasn't just a shade, it was like a room. It was like...someone lived there. I sat on the chair and wondered about the place. I had never seen something like this. It was like a complete house, with an exception of a lock on the door.


"Kitni ajeeb jagah hai...aisa lagta hai ki jaise yahan par koi rehta hai."


"Aapne sahi kaha. Yahan par koi rehta hai."


I was too shocked. How in the world, did she know? And who lived here?


"Aap jaanti hain unhe? Pankhudi, kaun rehta hai yahan par?"


She smiled shyly. It was like she was embarrassed.


"Hum."


"Matlab?"


"Humara matlab hai ki...yeh humara ghar hai. Hum rehte hain yahan par."


I clearly had no idea what to say. I was shocked. How could she live here? Although, it was a pretty decent place, but still...how can a blind person live all alone? There was no way that someone else lived here too...because it clearly had one bed only. And Pankhudi won't share a bed with someone...unless...


"Pankhudi, aapki shaadi ho gayi hai kya?"



To be continued...

Hey Friends...I know... The Cliffhanger was not a right thing to do... But...still...I am updating everyday. So, you don't have to wait that much !

Please leave a review if you like this one :)

P.S. - Tomorrow is Father's Day...so i may or may not be able to update tomorrow...depends on the surprise i have planned for my father :) And meri taraf se Happy Father's Day to your fathers too <3

- Mahak
Edited by ...Mahak... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part. but its too short!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved
-Sorry for reserving again, I'll unreserve tomorrow...
Edited..
One again beautiful update.. Mayank's very caring.. so Nupur could see and then she lost her vision... I felt really bad for her, first being able to see the colors of life and then snatch them away.. what could be a worse punishment...
I really admire Nupur.. even though being through so much she's still happy with what she got..
Awesome update Mehak.. It was a pleasure reading it... especially the dialouges written in Urdu... :) Cont. soon...
-Laiba
Edited by .SilentPrincess - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww mahak superb part loved it now can't wait for next part and ya happy fathers day to u too and all friends here 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago




I am happy that you find it nice...

And I am thankful to you for leaving a review... :)
Edited by ...Mahak... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update Mahak!
waiting for the next update
nd Happy Father's Day Everyone 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing , awesome , beautifully written
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Posted: 14 years ago




I am happy that you find it AWESOME...

And I am thankful to you for leaving a review... :)

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