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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#81

hmm. im loving it

specially the last line

her fears n his determination...looking fwd..

n for the frst time on ur ff i need to say

update soon

lol...GOd blees u

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#82

u know kinza i call u a magician...becoz u hv the qulity u c.i never read any FF or SS unless it is abt mayank -nupur...may be some OS, but nope, not any SS or FF...but u made me not only read this story but also ur writing made me fall in love with this story..such a powerful impact u hv on ur readers...magician u r!!!!!!

i loved this chapter a lot actually...nupur's condition was described really well...i can picture it.in front of my eyes... ummm don't be surprised if i comment on mayank & nupur here...coz to tell u the truth even though the story is abt maheen malik & the stranger, my heart only imagine nupur & mayank here.sorry can't help it.even in the above line i realized i wrote nupur's name by mistake after i wrote it...lol..but i don;lt want to correct the mistake...so mera coment toh aisahi hoga.adjunst kerlena thodasa😛 dilse sorry if u mind...😳

waiting for the next part now!

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Awesome update

Loved it loads

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da PM

Muahhh

Xxx

<33

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

awesome updt kinza
thanks for the pm

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

wowww i just read the 3 parts and they are awesomeee sry for replaying late coz i was out of town

thx alot for the pm

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Maheen is spoiling her life..Waiting for Next chapters kinza

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

its really very intresting Fanta😳

i liked her behaviour with Mayank...n his too😆😳

Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

I really loved all the 3 parts and i also loved the name of the character...
Maheen malik...
very cute and i found it very bold and sweet...
Anyways waiting for the new part

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Awe, Fanta!! 🤗

Firstly, I should apologize for being irregular, I have been caught up these days. I should also apologise for my weird entry and exit on chat yesterday, as i told you Dad was home. Sorry.. :(

Coming to this story, its intriguing. I really loved this chapter, more than the previous chapters. For one, this was long. And two, I could really start to understand the characters. I can frankly say that I relate to Maheen in a lot many ways. So, it makes it all the more interesting to read.

And then, this mystery guy. Hmm...I like him. 😆 Oh, why don't mystery guys meet me on the road. At least I wouldn't be so rude. 🤣

Continue soon, Fanta. You're going great!! 🤗

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Its wonderful kinza...Loved the interaction bw the two...
Im excited now to know how cud he meet her everyday...The hero is cute n caring...Though maheen is rude but im loving this stiffness...
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