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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

a broken family girl! i've seen the growth of a broken family child from as near as anyone could, not being the child herself. and trust me, thats the last life i'd ever want.

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

nice update Kinza! poor Nupur 😭 continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Wohooo!!

Lovely chappie, fanta!!

i loved the Zeeshan - Maheen conversation. To tell you the truth, I still imagine them as Mayank and Nupur. yes, I am delusional that way. 😆

Alright so, i get why she is the way she is with her father. And this guy, he is the most interesting aspect of this story. . . But ofcourse!! LOL

Enjoyed it!! Continue Sooon!!

Love,

Akki :)

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

beautiful kinza...tht guy is her teacher...lol.

amazing...

now will see more interestings things...

update soon...

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

A mixed update... I can't believe I for one moment felt bad for her father..: I take back that guilt... I find her actions reasonable... Still runing her life is maybe too much but a too a extent I can understand...

I didn't undestand one thing, did her mother die or did she just leave?

Oh.. Interesting twist, so he's her instructor.. I think he'll be the one showing her the right way.. Annd helping her throughout...Starting with her thesis...

Awesome update Kinza... Loved the names.. Maheen & Zeshaan...

-Speaking of mN... As long as there is no other couple from tellywood, its alright with him, MN or someone else..

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

fantastic update

dnt know wat happened btw maheen parents...bt the father-daughter confrontation was really heart touching

n the convo btw mr.zeeshan n miss maheen was sooo sweet...hope dis man brings out the real maheen

cont soon n tnx fr pm

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

i can understand maheen's feelings towards her dad...a child can't hate his/her parents...but there is something which stop them to love them...whatever it is...it's so painful...