Dark Temptations [My OS Gallery]: Breathe : Pg 11

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Soumya

@lilangel_soumya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

hey mahak,

it was a beautiful OS

i felt as if there was more to it that was not said

for me this was sort of like a prologue to a whole new story

at the end of this OS the one thing that came to my mind was why is love so complicated? why cant it be simple? i loved the way you expressed all the emotions

great writing! 😊

can't wait to read more

love soumya

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

hey mehak...
really beautifully written..
i like your style of writin

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

woww mahiii outstanding OS seriously well written and the way u penned down touching emotions awesome 👏

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

AWESOME BLOSSOME!!!

really i just so blood loved it!!

whoa...tooo good!!

thanks a ton for the pm!

love

komal

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Rafa.LunaPotter

@Rafa.LunaPotter

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Hey! Another fellow TS Fan? How can I not do the honours with a hug? :P. This song is what keeps me awake at night, been my soul concrete for so many days! And the OS was apt! Great job! U and TS too! She's an angel! :D

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Saniya

@saniya.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

this was beyond beautiful. I can't tell you how much I loved this piece of writing.<3 Do write more & thanks for the PM :)

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

beautiful one mahak
thanks for the pm

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

very nice os with nice writing

thanks for the pm.

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

I played my music player because songs are the best medicines for the pain.
mahak this line is true and every time i feel that there is no body for me to help me i do the same
really touching os and the song i love it
the way you describe all this i mean this is naturally happen but we can't describe it in that way how you describe it...
lovely song and lovely world.

But no matter what, I had to learn. Learn to breathe… without him. I know I have hurt him immensely and I am sorry for hurting him, but this is the only way I can save my heart from breaking into pieces. I know I am being utterly selfish. I can't breathe without him, but I know… I have to.
actually i want to write many things but i don't have words
lovely os
sorry for the delay