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Alisha2887

@Alisha2887

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Welcome back Kanky 😃🤗

Superb introduction - it was beautifully written. It's a very interesting and different story.

Looking forward to reading this one. Please continue soon and thanks a lot for the pm.

Edited by Alisha-MJHT - 14 years ago

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Reserved. Welcome Back Kanks! 🤗

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Wow, I nearly forgot to edit this until I read your pm. The title seems really astounding. I don't really know what I'm saying, but the first thing I look at is the title. If I hadn't read your short story yet, then I would've just liked to read it because of the title itself. Just wanted to point that out.

To me, the beginning already makes a person be willing to read more. You really kept it simple and to the point, which is why I liked it so much. The concept seems really interesting to me. Also, sorry for reply at such a late time. Deeply apologize for that.

Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 14 years ago

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saraaa.

@saraaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Res ... will read as soon as I get the chance😉

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Wow! Like always, fantastic job Kanky👍🏼 And yes, the thoughts of this girl or boy is quite a puzzle...can't wait to read more of what you write! It's been awhile since I have read something of yours😳 OMG your sucha great writer😛 Have you ever thought about writing your own novel?😆

Edited by KaShBaarish..xx - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-
-RES-

Will edit soon!

And WELCOME back! 🤗 Missed you sista!

Edited:

Okay, What was that Kankshita? I have a feeling, I know who the story is about. You know whom I'm talking about, don't you?
Was his life really like this? I mean all this is actually true? I though the ___ chapter was all closed by now, why are you again bringing it up? I would love to read more, but not at the cost of an unhappy friend. I can't say much here. But as you mentioned it in the last, its a li'l confusing. Well, for me it is.. all the adoption and all his thoughts they are a li'l haphazard and what was it about his father's b'day? Didn't his father want to support him any more?

Do continue it only if you are stable enough to do so, its just sisterly concern. I'm really sorry if you think all my talk is rubbish and you don't want so much of interference. And do the others know about this thing you are writing? They have a right to know what all has happened na?

Love

Sharmila

Extra-concerned people! 😆🤓

I'll tell you what - writing always helps. And I am one of those who wouldn't do anything in the world unless they wish to. So I am okay with this, I like writing this one - not only because of the association but because its giving me a scope to imagine as well - so technically, its entirely a story I am penning - doesn't establish any other bond with me.

The father thing - this one's real. This is his foster father I have written about and no, he did always have his responsibility.

Thanks. 😳

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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Meghna

@meggs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

do add me o ur pm list..
the begining was rally interesting i wud definitly like to read more

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-Sindhu-

@-Sindhu-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

*Reserved*

I did read it. But will edit tomorrow after coming back from college.

Edited by -Sindhu- - 14 years ago

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saraaa.

@saraaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Edited on the 2nd page😃

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

hey kanky..nice concept..

the girl is adopted..n lol, thats really sad when no one turns up for that party on april 1st..

but why does she feel like a loner?..she has a few friends in school right..

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Angel-Pebby
Coming back in a while! 😳

*Edit*

That was real nice of a beginning! i just loved it. That was a pretty unusual theme, i am to say. I guess... a pretty well penned up story coming my way, hun! Though, i'm so unfamiliar with the plot, i love it more than your previous works... irrespective of how much i loved the title for this one! ;) heheh... so, a loner huh! I like.. to read about people who stay all by themselves, closed up! and one day i plan to do research about that... *wake up!* :P :P

So, i'm looking forward to this!
I have a feeling that its gonna be a rocking one!
Continue soon!
Love you.. :)

Thanks a lot, you're encouraging! 😳

Loners are strange a subject to research on, I am technically one myself and as much strange. Though, loners are intrinsic people you come across not very often - there always is intrigue of getting to know them. 😃

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