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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Beautifully written kanky.. and I loved your signature..

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Hiiii
Beautiful os
Loved it
U r awesome
Thanks 4 sharing
Thanks 4 da pm

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Kanky no words to discribe for ur OS
outstanding n u brought tears in my eyes hun
beautiful OS thanks alott for writing this os n the pm

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Wow it is so amazing I just loved it wonderful and the poem in the end is also mind blowing keep writing like this and do pm me

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

hey kanky....beautiful os...

u hav written it so nicely...!!:)

it was veryvery very nice:)

divya

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497410

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Res!

~Edited~

Hola Kanky!

The OS is AWESOME!

Extremely well written!

And I was imagining you and only you thru out the OS..... Its how you are in school right?.... Its how you move around people na?.....

Err . . .I'm happy that you are happy about your new found self and all that... But don't you think you should interact with people more?.... I mean you are alright when you are around us ( us ka matlab hai.... the gang) . . . Dont you really talk around with anybody at school??...

And you don like free classes??? 😲 Kya ladki hai tu!!

And 8th graders discussing about Tere Liye?? Zamana badal gaya hai!! 😆

The OS is Amazing... you've done a great job!⭐️ And I forgot to add this earlier... The Poem is Wonderful.... Has an awesome feeling in it.... Love the poem! 😳

Love

Sharmi

Edited by -Sharmila- - 14 years ago

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

hey kanky its again beautifully written yar..

u r a gud writer yar...

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Wow... trust u to come up wit something unique and out of the world amazing..❤️ Fascinating update dear... truly mesmerising 👏👏👏

Luvd the theme.. and the end...🤗 Great work.. and thanks for the PM

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

As I am sitting here with the fall-like weather coming at 1 am, I am just speechless by your work every time I read something written by you.

The one thing that amazed me the most was the poem. I swear, I haven't read anything like that before. Just the use of rhythm in the poem was clearly noticeable. You can definitely tell that I am awe-struck by this poem.

Kesha's characterization was written down beautifully. I found myself in her too. I don't read the encyclopedia like she did, heck, I hate reading books in general (ffs and os and ss are a different story)! But the way she offers to help even though if doesn't help, makes a connection to my own life.

And I know what you meant by it got diverted. I noticed that in the story, but that happens a lot of times. In fact, when I intend to make my os longer, they turn out to be diverted. Coincidently, I was typing up an os right at this moment and I so happened to get on india-forums and read your os.

Anyways Kanky, I think you've gotten enough of my blabbering for now. I'll talk to you later, kay? Bye