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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

hey kanky..nice one-shot..

it was very well written, i seriously felt for her. She preferred to keep away from others and stay alone?..i know she didn't like gossip, thats pretty understandable..

she was also quite mature for her age, considering she's only 12, and she's learnt to live life on her own?..seriously 12-year olds have no tensions, man..

she tried to isolate herself from everyone but her books..n people found her weird too, which she didn't give a damn about..but how long can u go on like that..?..

i somewhat feel she didn't choose to be this way..but circumstances made her this way..n i wonder what it could be that hurt her so much..she can't even get over it?..

its really sad..but a good piece of work :)

thnx 4 d pm
do write more

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yashasvini

@Yashh...

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

OMg...!! Kanky
beautifully written.......👏
I love the poem in the lst
thnks for PM

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Kanks 🤗

Ohmigosh! This was such a heart wrenching piece! Truly sad. I don't know but for me this OS had such a strong essence of reality. It all seemed so believeable.

I could easily see that you deviated with your ideas mid way but then it just added more to the impact for me. A OS in it's true form =]

Absolutely brilliantly written! You my girl, are a little prodigy!

Bravo!

Keep writing more.

Love <3

Daania

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

heyyyyy kanky

it was awsome yaar

loved the last lines

thanx for pm

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Ishaan

@-Ishaan-

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Yaar mere jaane se pehle mujhe ye kisi tarah samjha de ki tu itna jhakkas kaise likhti hai? I love ur writing style AND ur stories.....

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

beautifully written

thanks 4 the pm

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Aishwarya

@-Aish-

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Res!!

*Edited*

Girl, what do you eat before writing, eh? Yet again, no mistakes are no again. Yet again, flawless. Yet again, superb flow of words. Wow!

The title of the blog's AWESOME! But you ain't sinister. I am. 😛 You're a good, sweet, innocent baccha who desperately tries NOT to be so. And I know you are going to vehemently refuse this fact.

Kesha reminds me, kinda, kinda like you. The attitude, the style of writing, all of them remind me of you. Maybe that's because you wrote it, but then, who knows?

I want to know what exactly you had in mind when you were framing this OS. It intrigues that a 2 kg brain could think up of such different stories. It really does.

You've done a great job with the OS, Kanky. This is one of the many reasons I want to learn from you, and the reason why I call you a guru. I could never write sad stuff. I could never make my writers connect with the character, all of which you can. Don't call me pessimistic for this, I'm just stating facts out here.

All in all, A M A Z I N G.

With love,

Aishwarya

<3 <3 <3

Edited by -Aish- - 14 years ago