Debby's Store of This & That:Getting Married|Pg 12 - Page 7

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

gr8

thanx 4 d pm

Debs!!

what a story!! I love ur way of writing...so vivid, so beautiful...!!

And heart-wrenching...I was stunned by the last line!!

Beautiful!!

Debby!!🤗

Originally posted by: myownarea

Debs!!

what a story!! I love ur way of writing...so vivid, so beautiful...!!

And heart-wrenching...I was stunned by the last line!!

Beautiful!!

Originally posted by: naina0123

Debby!!🤗

That was fab..the last line shattered me!really beautiful...i love the way you describe the atmoshphere u know..one can actually feel the air around it..ok..there i go again with my nonsense!I better stop now..

Loved it.

Originally posted by: -madhvi-

wao !!!! wat a story debby
loved the irony......
how conveniently we do not consider the other persons pain
i loved the story to the core
but i had kinda guessed the mother wud commit suicide, my 6th sense prolly told me...
ur description of everything was nice......i srsly liked it
ur amazing
thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: Senny

Debby you just threw me out of my chair, how could you?😆

Wow Debby I had no idea that you could write such diverse stories. You continue impressing me again and again. This store of this and that, leaves me more and more excited each time. I can't even tell you how excited I am to read something surprising ahead.

Two things which stood out in the whole story its so true even i feel at times, I want to die and not die die as you said, just to have a fresh beginning and a new identity thus any old miseries don't haunt me but then again maybe we just ask for too much there, don't we.

Another thing was the end, Rupa my heart went out to her, I understand how Raima felt but Raima didn't give much thought to how Rupa felt about matters or how she was dealing with life. I guess maybe I am thinking way too much as usual hehe.

Excellent job Debby.

P.S: I am extremely sorry for the late reply. Much love always,

Senny.