Death Talkies: Wheel of Time [Apr/04 P66] - Page 45

Originally posted by: .-Moksha-.

My knowledge of Hindu mythology is very limited and narrow...in fact I shun myself for not recognising the Deity until I read Ivre's comment. However this was so eloquently written, the fantasy element in itself was surreal...I can't really explain it. This has to be one of the best pieces in this series, I applaud your skills!

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

that is like wow...

i was actually imagining Lord Shiva standing at the Kailash...looking at everything...

i imagine the laughter he was attracted to was Parvati...n not Sati...as u said...that there was recognition...

truly wonderful...

Originally posted by: hamini_yash

Your writing style is awesome.

I feel like I am reading a book of short stories,

your words are so cryptic it makes me think , am I able to deciper what are you trying to explain through there stories?

Some sad , some devasting, some dreamy and some unimaginable how do you manage to find such web of sentences which linger around the reader so easily as if by default? and for so long

I feel you are giving competition to your own stories and thus I fail to pick any one as my favourite.

Anyways thanks alot for PM.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: Nocturne

The cosmic love story re-told in your words only makes it that much more divine...

The whispers of an eternal longing vibrates in their presence. Oh! dear...this is going to be personal my favorite and I was just planning something along the same lines for the Mahadev forum.

I have the same question as Jyoti. Sati?

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Now why do I think, I'm going to keep coming back to editing this time and again?

Here is the link to this thread that I posted in Mahadev Forum.

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See I told you I will come back...

I wanted to tell you that your words are pure poison...It is a maddening elixir, this piece. I have no idea how many times I have read it so far...

*Edit*

I think this is your best piece yet...I could be biased. But that is just so obvious too...

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This is something I wrote about your piece, thought you would want to know...
I was describing to another buddy how such words could have come to you...Well, at least this is how I pictured it.

"Her piece was something else...its like a sudden stir you feel in your heart and then you just write with a divine awareness, the fingers fly on the keyboard, and you forget that you were just beginning to feel pangs of hunger..then its a world where only words remain...

Words chosen, not selected because they come from a different place. And they descend on you as a thin mist without struggle...it isn't catching the tail of an evading muse that flits past your conscious. Its an awakening to its presence and then being written...one word in the place of three...yet speaking with the same depth, all the way"

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

u know her writing is like that only...

when i read n then start to type my comment...for the first few minute my fingers dont work on keyboard...

n when i do start to write...i have no idea what i am writing...words just flow...

her writing has some kind of magnetic pull...that makes words come out automatically...

n this piece i was like...wow...

n when she wrote abt recognition...i couldnt help but think whether it is Sati or Parvati...

Originally posted by: ucompleteme

Superb. The novice in me is always stunned by a couple of writers on this forum who never use an extra word when the words they have written will suffice. The way you have written this comes from a deeper place and thus holds a deeper place for us. Loved it.

Originally posted by: Parthenope

I can't believe I didn't see this PM until now!

Shiva! You wrote about Shiva!

Here was everywhere... words that contain the essence of an incomprehensible cosmic truth between them.

Your ~500 words captured His essence better than the entire Immortals of Meluha series... Thank you!

-Devi